Hi, this is ZeldaIsShiek, here to review another amazing piece of literacy and beat the Werewolves once and for all! For the Witches shall win in the end! But before that happens, I am going to help you improve your writing as a whole and improve you as a Young Writer in the process. Of this I am certain. I like all literacy, regardless of what genre or subject it is falls under. When I review your work, this will become apparent to you. Are you ready? Let's begin the review!
I absolutely LOVE the message behind this poem! It is true that there are many things in life to enjoy, but only the happy things can set us free. This is a very accurate message to send to your readers, and I think that you must be a very astute poet to accurately incorporate this theme into your work. That takes a lot of skill and effort, and that is something that a poet must have in order to succeed at doing what they love. Your work truly is amazing, and I don't really have that much left to say here. I think I'm done with this review, but I'll add more for you!
My favorite lines are the last three because of the rhyme scheme and the clever use of commas. Remember to always enjoy the happy things in life, and be happy for who you are! I hope to review your work again soon. Bye!!!!
-ZeldaIsShiek
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