Revenge for Poseidon- SC

by Holiday30

Published March 18, 2016

18+ Language Violence Mature Content

In twisted Biblical stories

Warning: This work has been rated 18+ for language, violence, and mature content.

Chapter 4

Several months later…………………………………

“Sir Hercules!” A seeing angel called.

“Yes.” Hercules answered.

“We have spotted Satan Jr. He is apparently at the church in Kerala.”

Kerala, The church where-”

“My friend, St. Thomas was last seen.” Jesus finish.

Hercules looked at Jesus. He watch him as he pounder thought, trying to figure out why would Satan Jr. want to go there.

The seeing angel who was there with them was about to sound the alarm when Hercules grabbed his hand.

“Don’t ring the alarm yet.”

“But Hercules I have my orders to-”

“I know but just give me and crew 15 mins. That’s all we need.”

Jesus looked up at Hercules. Him and Hercules eyes connected and Jesus put his head down in shame.

“J I know you want to play by the book. I know you want to give this guy a trial and you are a good soul, but I am asking you, as your friend look the other way this once. He killed two angels and one was my best friend. Plus he was a god in another realm. He only came here to this one to get a job done. He didn’t have to stay and help god cast miracles. He didn’t have to stay and help hold off the demonic forces…but he did. Zeus is already ready to go home to explain to the people of his realm what has happen to their god, his brother. Jesus please just give him the chance to avenge his brother death.”

“But nothing good ever come from revenge Hercules.” Jesus explained hoping Hercules would reconsider what he was about to do.

But Hercules did not listen instead he looked at the seeing angel and said “tell my team to Zeus and Percy to meet me at the front gate, also get Artza. Tell her I will need her help today.”

Hercules began to walk to the front gate when Jesus grabbed his arm. Hercules looked back at Jesus.

“You are gonna need a healer.” Jesus said.

Hercules smiled and said “well I guess you are coming then.”

They all met in front of the gate. “Alright the seeing Angels have agreed to give us exactly 15 mins. To do what we need to do. So let’s get the job done fast.” Hercules coached.

“But Herc, I thought god told us not to kill Satan Jr.” Percy questioned.

“Right we are not going to kill him but we will beat his ass so bad he will wish we did kill him.” Hercules smiled as he raised one hand in the air.

The rest of the group followed and did the same.

Hercules jumped down first, and Percy was about to follow when Zeus put his hand on his shoulder.

“I want you and Jesus to stay close, these guys caught us off guard last time and I don’t want you two to get hurt.”

“Yeah sure me and Jesus can kick it……but J I will be honest with you. I am going after that bitch that killed my father. Are you up for it?”

Jesus looked uncertain for a moment but quickly answer, “Percy I know you will protect me with your life, so I will do the same.”

Percy nodded as him and Jesus jumped down. Then Zeus and Artza followed. Each of the angels landed in different spots in Kerala, Asia.

“Well now how did I know you were going to be the one who landed in front of me?” Satan Jr. asked with a smile. Hercules eyes never moved off him as he grew a smirk.

“Maybe because you put out the highest energy level? You knew I was coming, but not for you.” Hercules said as he pointed to the dark door way. You can hear the footsteps as they got closer to the door. Jugo finally came out the door way.

“Now how did you know Jugo was with me?” Satan Jr. smiled.

“Just a lucky guess.” Hercules smiled back.

In the middle of a forest……………………………………

Zeus landed there and was greeted by the twin titans Beasts. He looked at both of them.

“Well now you two are defiantly new to me.” Zeus laughed as he began to rub the back of his head. In a blink of an eye though Canos was in front of him with his hand cocked back as he swung. Zeus dodged the attack but still got scratched in the face. As he went to land back on his feet he tripped over Kronos who was behind him.

Zeus went tumbling backwards. He sat up. “Man, that wasn’t nice, you think you guys would have a little manners. I know that y’all are evil but you could at least said hey.”

“That is how we say hello.” Kronos mocked.

“My name is Canos and I am Kronos.”

“You might have heard of us.” Canos finished.

“Yes I have you are the twin tiger Titians. Said to be the back bone of the resurrection of the Titians. Y’all are a totally different breed from the original Titians. Y’all are faster and stronger, and more perfectly equipped to fight against the zodiac core. The reason why is because y’all do not have to rely on cancellation magic…”

“Finally someone who understands that we aren’t worry about the Zodiacs.” Kronos praised.

“Oh for heaven sakes, they should be the furthest thing on y’all mind.” Zeus said as he grabbed the necklace around his neck. He smiled.

“Oh they are.” Canos replied back.

“Good, because I would want y’all distracted from the one thing that y’all should be worried about.” Zeus said as he slapped his hands together. As he took them apart the bow pendent began to grow. He the grabbed the full size bow. On his back appeared his magical quiver as he grabbed a lightning bolt.

“Olympian magic, destructive lighting.” Zeus said as he shot off a lighting attack. It crashed where the twins where.

Meanwhile on a distant farm………………………………

“I wonder when our opponent will show.” Prince Titian said as he and his mother stood on top of the barn.

“We probably won’t get an opponent… they can since our power levels and are trying to stir clear of us.” Queen Titian laughed.

“Angelic Magic, piercing arrow. “ A voice quietly said as an arrow from over 100 meters away.

The arrow traveled quietly and fast as it shot pass both Queen Titian and Prince Titian and destroyed the left pillar of the ban they stood on. The whole left side barn then collapse as Prince Titian began to fall.

He quickly recovered though as he landed on his feet.

“My son are you okay?”

“Mother look out!”

Queen Titian turned and in front of her was and angel.

“Angelic magic, Bulls eyes tag.” The Angel said as she pushed Queen Titan in her chess and sent her flying.

Queen Titian quickly rebound, and floated in the air. The angel who attacked her was a woman. She had black hair with little lips and hips. Her legs were skinny and her stomach was flat, however she had big breast.

She was wearing a red jacket with three buttons but only had it button up to the 2nd one. She had on a red skirt, with black pin strips running down it. She wore little glasses that where square shaped.

“Once Queen Titian realized who she was she started to grind her teeth together. “It’s you!”

Elsewhere in the heart of the city of Kerala, Asia. ..

Deception was leaned up against the side of a building shuffling threw her cards. Bain lips moved.

Deception kept looking at her deck as she shuffled. “Yes Bain I know we have visitors. I have been sensing their energy levels since they were here.”

Bain lips moved again.

Deception pulled a card from the top of her deck, looked at it and then put it back. “Bain, it’s not Gabriel or Michel, so relax…...besides no one would want to hurt your adorable face.”

Bain arms began to move fast and frantically. As his lips began to pick up speed.

Deception laughed out loud. “Bain chill okay…I have never let harm come to u before and I am not going to let it start now.”

She then stopped shuffling the cards. “So they are ready to make their move huh?” She quickly drew the card from her deck and threw it without even looking to see what card she chose.

“Demonic arte, Soul release. Big shield Guardian.” The card began to transform into a creature with no hands or arms and it had little legs. It did have a giant shield in front of its chess. The creature had a little round head and a black leather helmet. It landed right in front of Deception as a blade peered out the black shadow of the ally. It crashed into the metal plated shield.

“Ahh!” Percy yelled as he winced in pain. He was still holding the blade with his right hand but his right arm just dangled there. He wasn’t able to move it at all.

Deception never taking her eyes off of Percy ducked as Jesus came down swinging. She then kicked Jesus and sent him flying into a car that was parked on the street.

“Jesus!” Percy yelled. That’s when Big Shield Guardian smacked him with the shield and sent him flying in the air. He came down crashing on top of the car beside the car that Jesus got kicked into.

Jesus opening one eye was wincing in pain.

“Percy. Percy are you okay?” Jesus asked.

Percy rolled off top of the car as he fell to one knee. He and Jesus both were breathing hard.

“Damn, the fight hasn’t even gotten real yet and I can see already we are out matched.” Percy gasped.

Jesus looked over and seen Bain.

“Hey there is a civilian here. Should I try to get him out of here while there still time?”

Percy eyes left off Deception just for a moment to see who Jesus was talking about. Once his eyes landed on Bain Percy broke out into a deep sweat. He then took the cold sweat that rest on his head and made it into a bubble round his left hand. He then began to touch his right arm as he winced in pain. After a couple of seconds he began to move his right arm.

“Still sore but not broken no more.” He thought as he stood up.

“Jesus, run.” Percy said.

Jesus looked at Percy with confusion.

“No Percy, you will need me. You just said-”

“I know what the hell I said but circumstances have changed. That kid over there is Bain Verlorene Liebe.”

“Bain Verlorene Liebe?” Jesus repeated in a question form.

“You don’t know this kid, but he was probably the strongest angel to ever live. Hercules wanted to train him himself but the kid ended up training with Gabriel and Michel, and we ended up training you. Then one day the kid disappeared….just vanished. Your father put out a KAR out but kept it on the hush.

“Why?” Jesus asked.

“Because it was a huge thought that he was not kidnapped and he just came to save his sister.” Deception smiled.

Percy looked at her with deep hatred.

“Oh, oops were you going to tell him???? I am sorry, I thought you didn’t know.” Deception grinned.

Jesus looked at Percy and could tell he knew they had no chance to make it. But how can he know this. They already knew Deception fighting style, they knew her power, and they even drew up a game plan to beat her. Could that child be that much of a game changer to make Percy abandon all hope?

“Percy we can still do this.” Jesus preached.

“You don’t understand. “

“But?”

In a blink of an eye Bain was right there in front of the two.

He raised his hand and as he yanked down Banshee amhránaíocht appeared as he swung down. Percy took his blade and successfully blocked the attack. But started to scream in agonizing pain.

“Percy are you okay?” Jesus asked as he started to put his hand on Percy shoulder.

“Don’t touch my shoulder idiot!”

Jesus stopped in mid strive.

Deception giggled. “Wow you sure lucky that Percy knows how Banshee amhránaíocht.”

Jesus just looked at her.

“The property of that sword is special. See true it could cut anything but that’s not all. The blade can also send off attacks using sound.”

“So he can use sound?” Jesus asked himself.

“I wonder how long your friend can last.” Deception laughed.

Jesus then turned and looked at Percy who looked like he was in pain.

Jesus move quickly. “Angelic arte: Mothers nature hand.

A hand popped out the ground and grabbed young Bain. That’s when Percy had dropped down to his knees.

“Percy.” Jesus announced as he came to his aide.

“Angelic arte: Hands of a healer.” Jesus said as he touched Percy.

Percy started to breathe more easily as Deception clapped.

“Good job Jesus. You learned another way to heal people without using your Miracle arte.”

Jesus stood up and unsheathed the sword that was at his side.

“Ooo the pacifist has grabbed a weapon.” Deception laughed.

“Jesus you need to leave now.” Percy said.

“No, I won’t leave you we can win I know it.”

Bain turned his head a little to the left and looked at Percy and Jesus.

“Why is he staring at us like that?” Jesus asked.

In that same instance Bain tapped the rock hand once with his sword and in instantly crumble to nothing but dirt. He landed on his feet and stuck his hand out and mouthed a couple of words. Jesus eyes rolled in the back of his head as he fell unconsciously to the ground.

“Jesus!” Percy yelled as fell to his knees. Bain began to walk towards them. “I will kill you for harming the prince.” Bain quickly stopped in his tracks.

“Quit over reacting; he is not dead Bain use the Angelic arte known as slumber.” Deception voice said from behind Percy.

Percy eyes slanted back as he became speechless. “How did she get behind me so fast?” He thought. Deception then picked Jesus up and had put him across her shoulder.

“Get your filthy damn hands off the prince!” Percy yelled as he swung his blade. Deception caught his arm as the tip of it touched her forehead.

“You need to chill out.” Deception said as she twisted Percy’s arm. Percy yelled in pain as he let his sword go. She then pushed him to the ground and walked over to her brother Bain.

“Bain, my love, do me a favor and take Jesus to a safe spot and wait for me there okay?”

Bain mouth began to move.

“Bain don’t back talk me. I need you to do this while grown-ups talk.

Bain hands started flailing around as his mouth moved fast.

“Bain I am so grown, Last time I checked I was executed at the age 18 and that was 10 years ago so actually I am 28 thank you very much.”

Bain mouthed some more words, and that’s when Deception slapped him. Bain eyes grew wide as he rubbed his face. He looked at his sister as tears filled his eyes. She looked like she was about to cry and Bain knew what he just said hurt her feelings.

Bain mouth moved one last time.

“I know you are scared but I told you I am never going to leave you again until I can find someone who loves you as much as I do. That’s always been my promise and I always keep my promises right?” She asked.

Bain nodded. “Good now go.” Deception said as she kissed him on his cheek that she slapped. She handed Bain Jesus. Bain then took Jesus and left just as his sister had asked.

Deception stood up and looked at Percy. “Well aren’t you going to grab your blade?” Percy snarled as he kicked his blade and he grabbed it.

Deception just smiled. She could see Percy aura turn dark blue as his rage began to seep through his calm demeanor. “I am only going to ask you this once. Where did your brother take Jesus?”

“Hmm, what if I say I don’t know?” Deception asked as she twirled her hair.

“Fine, you want to play that game I will beat it out of you.” Percy said as he charged Deception. He swung his blade wildly at Deception. However Deception dodged every one of his attacks. He came in trying to pierce her chest but Deception took two of her fingers and push the blade into the ground as she sent him a spinning back elbow to the his face. Percy stumbled back as he tried to regain his composer. She then charged him and did a spinning kick. Fortunately Percy was able to get his blade up in time to block the attack. It still sent him flying though as he tumbled a couple of times. After a few seconds he got up breathing heavy and whipping blood from his nose.

Deception just stood there with a smile as she Jester him to come at her.

Back over at the church…………………………………………

Jugo swung with all his might, but Hercules dodged it and sent two quick jabs to Jugo face. Jugo stumbled back as Hercules charged him. Jugo swung again but once again Hercules dodged his attack as he got behind Jugo. He picked Jugo up with a mighty yell. He then slammed him on his head. Hercules then got up with quickness and sent a couple blows to Jugo’s face before grabbing him by the top of the back of Jugo’s pants. He lifted and threw Jugo across the lot. Hercules stopped his assault for a moment and just looked at the motionless body of Jugo.

“Well aren’t you going to come at me now? I mean after all you have taken out my most powerful asset.” Satan Jr. Smiled.

Hercules Just smiled back as he closed eyes and shook his head.

“Now me and you both know this fight is far from over. Your monstrous friend will rise to his feet in three, two, one… Jugo sat up. He cracked his neck and then came to stand on his feet afterwards.

“Well now Jugo you can still move…You are one tough bastard aren’t you?” Satan Jr. Joked.

Jugo eyes rested on Hercules. The air was heavy as you can since these two battling threw telepathy.

Hercules closed his eyes once more as a huge grin appeared across his face.

“Hey Satan Jr. you never seen my magic before have you?” Hercules asked.

“Magic? Well I was under the impression you couldn’t use magic my friend.” Satan Jr. laughed.

“You won’t be laughing for long.” Hercules grinned.

Satan Jr. grew quiet very quickly as he gave Hercules a serious look.

“Hey Hercules, the area has been evacuated and a barrier has been place. You and the rest of the angels have the green light to use y'all magic.” An angel voice said into the headphones that Hercules had in his ear.

“Thanks let the others know.” Hercules said back as he took off his two gold arm bands. He squeezed until the turned into gold dust. That’s when the air itself got dense and heavy as Satan Jr. looked with fear at Hercules.

“His power…..it’s unbelievable!” He screamed as Hercules unleashed his power.

Jugo moved quick as he threw a punch at Hercules. Hercules grabbed Jugo hand and threw him across the parking lot. Jugo quickly rebound but Hercules was already casting a spell.

“Angelic arte: Zeus pet beast.” He proclaimed as he put both hands together. He then push forward and a face of a lion with saber tooth teeth made out of lighting came soaring threw air. It hit Jugo body and the lighting swirled all around his body as Jugo for the first time showed pain on his face. His eyes rolled in the back of his head as he began to fall. That’s when Hercules cast another spell.

“Angelic Arte: Holy snake!” He yelled as he threw his right arm forward. His arm transformed into a long white snake that sank its fangs into the already stunned Jugo. Once the snake latched itself to Jugo it drove him into a tree that was about 100 feet away from the church. Red flames appeared above the snake every 4 inches or so until they reached the head.

Hercules just smiled as he took his left hand and placed it on the snake’s body. “Angelic Spell: Nirvana’s deviled bomb.” The red flames sank into the snake’s skin one after another. The Snake skin color went from white to red in a matter of seconds as its eyes turned bright orange right before it exploded. The tree that Jugo was pinned to as well as the surrounding trees all instantly burst into flames. Hercules arm returned to normal as he laid his focus Satan Jr.

“Your fate will not be as swift.” He said as him and Satan Jr. locked eyes.

Back in the forest………………………………………………… Zeus shot another lightning bolt. But Canos dodged it as he ran up on Zeus and swung his claws at him. Zeus dodged it and was about to shoot another arrow when Kronos came from behind and tripped him. Zeus fell backwards. He tried to rebound quickly but by time he was back on his feet Canos appeared in front of him. Canos gave him a swift right jab to his gut. Zeus bent over and Canos quickly gave him a couple of knee shots to the face. Zeus stumbled backwards. That’s when Kronos charged at him. He jumped up and did a spinning back kick and knocked Zeus off his feet. Zeus landed hard on his back. After a couple of seconds Zeus finally sat up, breathing hard. He wiped blood from his mouth as the two twins broke out into laughter.

“So is this it? This is the ultimate god in the realm known as Olympia?” Canos mocked.

“And here I thought you would live up to your nickname.” Kronos added as he shook his head.

“Oh yeah, that’s right, he does have that annoying name…what did one titan call him?” Canos asked his brother.

“The best tamer.” Kronos answered back.

“Yes, that’s it! The legendary beast tamer. Well it seems a bit ironic that you are about to be killed by two beast?’ Canos asked.

“I guess we could not be tamed.” Kronos said as he walked towards Zeus.

“Zeus the barrier is up; you have the green light to unleash all your powers.” An angel voice soared threw the headphone that was in Zeus ear.

Zeus grew a smile as he shot off another lightning bolt. Kronos quickly dodged it.

Zeus then stood up and his smiled covered his whole face. He held the bow up and said “So are y’all ready for the real fight?”

“Tsk, you talk like you have been playing all this time.” Canos boasted.

Zeus squeezed his golden bow. You could hear it crack under the pressure of his hand until…”SNAP!!!!!!!!!!” The bow sang.

“He broke his own bow.” Kronos said with disbelief.

Blue lighting shot down and struck Zeus where he stood. Once the lightning bolt disappeared the twins was able to see 4 beings there. First was Zeus. His body was now sky blue and is hair was long and silver. His eyes were all gold and gold dust flowed out of them. The three beings that were at his feet look like cats. They were about 2.3 ft. long and 4 ft. tall. They were sky blue as well with black eyes, with small white teeth. However they also hand fangs that hung out there mouth, exactly 15 cm. Each one had a different symbol on its head. They purred softly as they licked their teeth. Kronos and Canos took a step back as Zeus laughed.

“My bad please meet my beasts. That’s Alpha, Omega, and beta.” The cats stepped forward.

Canos swallowed hard. And balled up his fist as Kronos gave off a mighty roar before charging at Zeus and his pets.

Over at the Barn………………………………………………

Artza was shooting off arrows back to back at Queen Titian who seemed to block every arrow shot at her.

“You will have to do better than that!” Queen Titian mocked as she blocked another arrow. “Titian magic: God slasher.”

Artza disappeared and reappeared behind Queen Titian. “And if you think you’re any better than you should rethink it.” She claimed as she grabbed and arrow. “Angelic arte: Piercing arrow.” Artza shot the arrow.

Queen Titian deflected the arrow though and mocked Arta. “Is that the best you can do?” Your arrows are meaningless in this fight.”

“Are you sure?” Artza pointed as she pushed up her glasses on her face. She was pointing behind Queen Titian. When the Queen turned around she saw the arrow coming back at full speed.

“What? She asked.

“I never miss my target.” Artza told her.

Queen Titian took off at high speed in the air trying to escape the arrow, but the arrow was sync to her as it gained and gained on her. Queen Titian finally realizing that she cannot out run the arrow decided to turn and try to catch it but as she turned the arrow as right there. She was able to catch it but not before it pierce her skin. That’s when Artza appeared above her and gave the arrow a mean kick, shoving it further into the queen’s skin as the queen was sent tumbling down to the earth.

“Mistress Artza, the barrier is now up you have the green light to unleash your power.” An angel voice said through her headphones.

Artza look with disappointment. “I thought this fight would have been harder than what it was but it was relatively easy. I feel like I don’t even need to use my ultimate technique.”

“You over confident bitch I will kill you!” Queen Titian raged as she took off towards Artza.

“I said I felt like I don’t need to use my Ultimate technique, I never said I wasn’t going to use it.” Artza took another arrow out and aimed it at the charging queen. Dark clouds came rolling in as the air itself became enrich with spiritual power.

“Mother, quickly transform. Put on your mask!” Prince Titian yelled.

Queen Titian looked back, “Too late.” Artza smiled as she drew back.

“Angelic Spell: Wrath of Zeus!” Artza yelled as she shot the arrow. The arrow took off at tremendous speed. Purple lighting shot from the sky and infused itself with the arrow as it smashed into the body of Queen Titian. A huge purple light shined over the farmland for all to see.

While in the heart of the city……………………………

“Argh!” Percy yelled as he swung at Deception. She dodged his attack one after another. She did so gracefully while he was swinging so wildly. She took the back of her risk and ran it under his risk that was attached to the hand that was holding the sword. Percy lost grip of the sword. As it fell Deception caught it and drove the handle of the blade into Percy stomach. He fell to his knees as she put the blade under his neck. Percy eyes got wide. He knew he was supposed to have died right then.

“Oh Percy how are you supposed to be the one to end my life when you are fighting like this?” Deception asked as she shook her head.

“Fuck you, you evil bitch.” Percy said.

“Well right now the only person who is getting fucked here is you. I mean you have the advantage. You can see but I can’t.” Deception acknowledged.

“Wait you blind? You don’t fight like your blind. In fact you dodged my every attack like you can see.” Percy argued.

“Well that’s cause I can see them. “

“But you just said you can’t see.”

“Well I cant.”

“You don’t make any sense!”

“Okay put it this way, I can’t see how you look but I can see the outline of your body with your aura.” Deception explained.

Percy looked at her with disbelief.

“You don’t believe me do you?” Deception asked.

“Well would you believe that explanation if you heard it?” Percy answered back with his own question.

“Well look at my eyes, do you notice anything that is missing?” She asked.

Percy looked at her in her eyes and at first thought they looked like regular eyes. “Nope.” He answered.

“Really? You should really look again, after all everyone else has a black hole in the center except me.”

“Black hole, people don’t have black……” That’s when he noticed it. She did not have any pupils.

“Your pupils, there gone.”

“Yes I know, I traded them to have this power.” Deception said.

“But why?” Percy asked.

“Because I need to protect my little brother and it seemed the only person who was listening to my prayers was Satan Jr.” She answered back.

“But he took away your sight, god would have never-”

“Never answered. God never answered me once. He never came for me and my brother, nor sent anyone to come save us. I guess either he was busy saving someone else or something else to that nature or me or my brother wasn’t on his to ten list. Either way Satan Jr. came to my aide, and saved me and Bain. So yeah I gladly trade away my ability to see the light, because after all I was always in the dark.” Deception said. She began to crying, but was smiling at the same time.

“She is not really evil. She just needed help. Only if god could have, not he still can. He can still help her, and her and Bain can join us. They may have done damage as enemies but I know god will see it like I do. The good these two would do, the advantage these two would give us in the war, would outweigh all the evil they have done.” Percy thought as he looked at Deception.

Deception looked up and wiped her tears away. “Please don’t feel sorry for me. I chose this life, I knew exactly what I was getting into and I’m okay with it.”

“No, you’re not! I can hear it in your voice. You don’t want to be evil. You only took this route because you thought god couldn’t save, but he could, and he still can. Just come with me and I can help you and Bain. Y’all where just two kids in a fucked up situation, but it don’t have to be fucked up no more. Just trust me.” Percy said as he extended his hand to her.

She looked at him as she started to walk towards him. “Maybe he is right. Maybe all I want is for god to do is see. I want to be worth something, I want……” That’s when her deck pulsated and she stopped in mid tracks.

“What’s wrong?” Percy asked.

“My cards are right. There is no salvation for us except for Utopia.” Deception replied back.

“Utopia?” Percy asked.

“Yes.” Deception answered as she began to remember what Satan Jr. had told her. It was back in year 1993, after god had sentence her to an eternity in hell for all her treachery and disaster she caused on earth. Satan Jr., Jugo, and the twin beast came to break her out. They all were almost caught but Bain came out of nowhere and saved them. Once they were safe and sound in the Dark forest Deception broke down into tears in Satan Jr. arms and began to explain what happen.

“It was awful. I tried to explain to him that he never heard my prayer and he called me a liar. He said I never prayed to him. He said I willingly allowed myself to be consumed by darkness and evil. You were right, even down to even the part that he wouldn’t even acknowledge that there was a chance he miss my voice. He shifted the whole blame on me.”

Satan Jr. touched Deception forehead. “You’re burning up.” He said as he took his sleeve to wipe the sweat from Deception head.

“I know I feel this constant burning inside of me. This pain is unbearable.” Deception breathed heavily.

“Open your mouth.” Satan Jr. Commanded of Deception. He then bit his tongue and let his blood run out his mouth into hers. “I can’t promise that the pain will go away but my blood can subdue the pain you are feeling.” He explained.

A few seconds went by and Deception lay still on Satan Jr. lap. That’s when Bain walked up. His lips moved and Deception sat up quickly.

“Bain.” She whispered as she looked at the young boy with blonde hair standing in front of her. He had a halo above his head and had angel wings. That’s when the two twin beast tried to attack young Bain.

“No!” Deception yelled as two spirit creatures appeared before her. One looked like a half spider half human, while the other one looked like a metal angel. They both came to young Bain aide and stopped the twins. Deception looked at the two creatures.

“Well now, I didn’t expect you to be able to summon creatures already. I haven’t even begun to train you and yet you can already use your demonic power. This is incredible.” Satan Jr. Praised.

Deception ran to her brother and rubbed and looked all over his body for a scratch or bruise, luckily there was none as she sighed in relief.

“Why are you protecting this angel? He doesn’t belong here.” Canos roared.

“If you touch him I will kill you.” Deception growled back. That’s when her tails appeared and she grew three horns. Satan Jr. walked up and put his hand on her shoulder and smiled.

“My love don’t worry I ensure you we are all on the same team and we all want the same thing.”

“Which is?” Deception asked.

“Utopia.” Satan Jr. answered back.

“Utopia?” Deception asked again.

“Yes, a place where there is no heaven or hell, where earth is the joyous place to be. Where there is no Satan, no god, no demons, no angels, no good, nor evil. Just peace and happiness.” Satan Jr. answered back.

“How do I get to this Utopia? Can Bain go with me?” Deception began to question.

“Well, of course, my plan is to bring Utopia here, but if you are impatient then you can make it there before I bring it here.”

“How?”

“Easy, you will just have to find the one who has felt the same pain you have and get them to kill you in your demonic form. Once they done that and you have accepted how your life has ended for the second time you will be able to go to Utopia.”

Deception then came back to present from the back of her mind.

“Yes I can only be set free if I be sent to Utopia, and you are going to send me.” Deception smiled.

“No, I won’t.” Percy answered back.

“Why not? Do you not want revenge for your father’s death? You have the ability to get it now, so take it.” Deception demanded.

“No, you need help. You need god.” Percy said once more.

“Were you not listening to me? Your god does not acknowledge me. He hates me and the only way for me to stop suffering is to go to Utopia. That is what Satan-”

“For all we know Satan Jr. is lying! How does he know there is a place of peace after this one? He is probably the reason why god couldn’t hear you. Don’t you see??? You are expendable to him, if you want he wouldn’t tell you to go around and find a being to kill you. He doesn’t care for you hell, I don’t even think he cares for himself. Just listen to me, and come with me, to Nirvana. You can be saved.” Percy proceeded.

Tears fell from Deception eyes. “I thought you were the same as any other angel you know? Any other angel would jump at the chance to kill me, but you won’t. You really do have a heart of pure.”

“Well I am not an angel; I am a half human/ half god.” Percy smiled as he walked towards Deception but quickly stopped as he saw her pluck a card from her deck.

“I am sorry.” Deception said as the tears continued down her face.

Percy looked at the card and mumbled…”No please.”

“”If you won’t grant me my salvation willingly, I will force you to. Demonic arte: Soul Release, Ayokio go and force Percy to take my life.” Deception cried.

Ayokio appeared as she took a water harpoon and threw it at Percy. Percy dodged the attack but crashed into a car. The alarm continuously went off as Percy try to battle to his feet, but Ayokio took her foot and placed it on Percy’s chest. She summoned another water Harpoon. That’s when a red fireball smacked her in her face. Deception looked to the sky and seen a being with one red horn, and two red tails staring back at her. The beings eyes where blood red, and its hair flowed with the wind to the west.

“If this is what happens when you tell a demonic woman no, then I am glad I decided to stay single.” The Being Joked. Deception and a now pissed off Ayokio both looked at the being that towered over them with a cocky smile.

Back at the farm………………………………………………

“Damn it hold still you!” Artza cried as she shot another arrow at Prince Titian. He dodged it as he slid across the snow. He had on his blue mask that had the 3 silver dots at the top and at the bottom there was a large silver triangle. He changed the battle field to a snowy, icy fighting plane. He feels like this will give him an edge to win. Artza fired off a couple more arrows when the Prince Titian took his sword and did a full three sixty in the snow as he shot the snow up. The arrows one behind another shot through the snow. Once the snow wall fell The Prince was not there.

“Where? Where did he go?” Artza asked quietly as she looked around. That’s when she felt a sharp pain from behind her as her back instantly got warm. She hit the ground hard and beside her was her left angel wing. Artza in tremendous pain tried to get up but could not get her body to move.

“Now you die!” Prince Titian yelled as he charged at the immobile Artza. She closed her eyes and awaited impact when she heard the sound of two medal objects clanging against one another. She opened up her eyes to a man in a blue hooded cloak. His weapon was metal hands with a dagger attached at the end of them.

The man in the blue hooded clock forced Prince Titian back across the ice and snow.

“No! This cannot be. God are you punishing me? Out of all demons of which we have aligned ourselves with you allow this one to come save me.” Artza complained.

“Well hello to you to mother.” The man in the hooded blue cloak smiled. Prince Titian went to pick up his blade when a foot stepped on the tip of the blade. At the same time a scimitar was at his neck.

“Oh Bez honey, come say hello to mother.” The man in the blue hooded cloak said as he blew a kiss at Bez.”

Bez caught and said “I love you to Azulo.” He blew a kiss back and Azulo blushed. That’s when snow popped up.

“Azulo look out!” Artza screamed. But Azulo never turned around as a black being came out of nowhere and grabbed through the air and yanked out of thin air a black sword that collided with another sword. It was Queen Titian who was perceived as dead.

“Oh, mother you did a horrible job here. I thought you could at least manage to kill one.” Azulo said as he turned to Queen Titian who had on her mask.

“Tsk.” Artza sounded as she winced in pain. She was hurt both physically and mentally.

“Well I guess I owe you a big thank you Vangoe.” Azulo said with a smile.

“Trust me when I say, I prefer not you to thank me.” Vangoe said as rolled his eyes. A scythe then appeared around Queen Titian’s neck.

“Hey look Bez, even Sun Mungu Mtoto is here. Now the whole reaper core is here.”

Back in the forest……………………………………………… “Now my Lighting Liger, use white lighting strike!” Zeus commanded with a great boom in is throat.

There was a very large cat made out of blue lighting behind him. It had a main of a loin with black strips on its body. It also had gangs exactly at 300 cms. long. The large cat was 150 feet tall, and a 100 feet long.

It began to charge up for the attack and with a mighty roar it shot the white lighting out of its mouth. Canos a Kronos managed to dodge the powerful attack. Canos however crashed in a tree.

He winced in pain as he looked at the giant cat. “Damn it. Those damn cats of his were already a handful. Now why on earth did they have to fuse and make an even more difficult creature to deal with?” Canos asked breathlessly to himself.

Kronos now on the attack came at Zeus with full speed. “You are now wide open for attack.” Kronos yelled as he jumped in the air.

“Am I or have you fallen into a devious trap I have planted?” Zeus asked as he broke into a stance. His legs spread apart with both his fist clinched on both sides of his chest. He inhaled and that’s when…

“What the hell I’m slowing down but why?” Kronos asked himself inside of his head. A giant circle appeared underneath the two. After that a series of smaller circles appeared one inside another.

“This is known as the god circle. Only four beings can use this move and two of them are dead now.” Zeus explained as he watch Kronos body float down towards him.

“Now it’s over for you! Olympian magic: a 10 thousand striking bolt!” Zeus said as he began to swing at high speed. He struck Kronos 10 thousand times in 10 seconds. The last blow sent Kronos flying as he crashed into his brother which lied at a tree in the forest.

“Now Lighting Liger use white lighting strike!” Zeus commanded once more.

The liger roared fiercely as it shot off white lighting. Zeus looked down the path which is liger created in the tree line with its white lighting strike. There was no movement or no sign of life. Zeus then began to walk away.

“You have done well my pet, you can go now.” Zeus said as he walked pass the giant liger. It roared as it disappeared from site. Zeus body began to go back to its regular color when he coughed up blood. He fell to one knee as his eyes enlarged. He looked at the pool of blood in his hand as it took him back to when he first learned the god circle.

On the body of water back in Olympia……………

“Argh!” Zeus yelled as he charged a giant creature with wings. The creature caught his hand and sent him flying with a powerful back hand. That’s when another being appeared above the winged creature.

“Olympian magic: Inferno burst!” The being in the air yelled as he shot an organist, reddish colored beam out of his hand. The giant being with wings stuck his hand up and deflected the attack and disappeared from site.

“Hades, you will have to do better than that to kill me.” A voice said from behind the being in the air. Hades turned his head slightly to see the giant winged being above him with both its hands put together. It swung down with all its might across Hades back and sent Hades rocketing to the waters below. A huge splash happen after Hades body collided with the water below.

“Hades!” Zeus yelled as he began to run towards the spot where his oldest brother had land. But right before he could get there the giant winged creature appeared in front of him.

“And where do you plan on going?” The giant winged creature smiled a cocky smiled.

“Olympian magic: shocking blow!” Zeus said as he lunched forward swinging, but the giant winged creature dodged the attack and sent Zeus a devastating knee to the mid-section of Zeus. He hit him so hard that spit came out his mouth. As Zeus floated off the giant winged being knee it felt like days, weeks, even years floated by. Zeus watched helplessly as the giant winged creature clutched its fist tight and cock back. “This is it. I am going to die here.” Zeus thought as he floated in the air motionlessly.

“This is the end Zeus!” The giant winged being yelled as he swung. That when water shot pass Zeus and stopped the being fist from moving. Zeus landed onto a boat that was behind him. He sat and seen his brother Poseidon stirring the boat.

“Poseidon? But you are alive? How? Our father Cronos killed you. I and Hades saw it with our own eyes.” Zeus explained as he tried to get up. But he quickly fell back down.

“Don’t move. Your ribs are fracture and as far as what you and Hades saw was nothing but a trick I used to fool our father. I had to use that move to insure I could get away undetected, but I did not know you or Hades saw the move too, I am so sorry.” Poseidon said as he walked to the back of the boat. He looked at the giant winged creature that finally broke free of the waters grip. Zeus snapped and said “enough, Cetus, ploíarchos tou neroú tis ámynas neroú.”

Poseidon then jumped out the boat onto the water. “Poseidon wait, our elder brother Hades wasn’t even a match for this being and I am afraid he is lost forever at sea. I don’t want to lose you too. Please brother lets flee bow and come back to fight another day.” Zeus pleaded to his older brother Poseidon.

The boat then rocked back and forth. Zeus looked behind him, and he saw Ayokio behind him.

“Ayokio.” Zeus spoke softly.

“Ayokio, you job is to protect those two, is that understood?” Poseidon asked. Ayokio nodded and Poseidon walked up to the gigantic winged creature.

“Poseidon you’re alive. Hahaha, this is great. Now I can kill you myself and offer yours, and your brother’s head on a silver platter to mast Cronos.” The giant winged creature laughed.

“Tantalus that is enough.” Poseidon lectured. The Giant winged creature stopped laughing at once.

“How do-”

“I beat it out of ABADDŌN of the west.” Poseidon answered quickly.

Tantalus just burst out laughing. “You beat ABADDŌN, yeah right.”

Poseidon then snapped his fingers and out of the sky fell three dark figures fell down into the waters which Poseidon and Tantalus stood. When the figures came to float Tantalus eyes widen. “I just didn’t beat ABADDŌN; I killed him, Zopyros, and Livius. You are the only one left Tantalus of the north.”

Tantalus grinded is teeth and yelled, “You weak arrogant fool, you die here!” He then charged at Poseidon.

“Poseidon move!” Zeus yelled from the boat, but Poseidon did not move or flinch.

“I’m not going to die here, but I can’t say the same for you.” Poseidon said. That’s when a large circle appeared below Poseidon and Tantalus. Tantalus body slowed down as he floated towards Poseidon.

“Wha-what is this why am I moving so slowly?” Tantalus questioned as he floated in mid space.

“You have entered the god circle Poseidon said as he to a stance. Hands made a perfect divider of his body as his right was open and pointed up at the sky his left hand was pointed down at the water open palm. That’s when a series of little circles one inside another appeared inside the giant circle. Tantalus floated into arms reach of Poseidon and with one suck of air Poseidon said, “Olympian magic, Gyarados revenge!”

He struck Tantalus with one blow to his mid-section. A couple of seconds pasted and that’s when the circle disappeared and water began to run out of Tantalus mouth and his eyes rolled behind his head.

“Now you aren’t alone, go and join your brothers and sister in the belly of Gyarados.” Poseidon said. He then removed his hand, and Tantalus body fell into the water. Zeus quickly hoped out the boat and ran towards Poseidon.

“Poseidon that was amazing, can you teach me that move?” Zeus begged.

“What? Well Zeus first you have to…” Poseidon started but stopped as he fell to his knees. One arm holding his side while the other one covered his mouth. His face expressed deep pain as water came to his eyes.

“Poseidon? Poseidon what wrong?!” Zeus asked as he watched his older brother getting torture by some unseen force.

Zeus bended down to his brother level and looked him in his watery eyes. After a few minutes Poseidon removed his hand from his mouth so he could show his younger brother Zeus. There sat a pool of blood in Poseidon’s hand. That’s when Poseidon grabbed his brother up in his shirt and pulled him close. “I-I will teach you and Hades this move, because we will all need to be able to draw out all of our godly powers to kill father. But after that promise me you will never use this technique again. I will make Hades make the same promise. Promise me Zeus, that you will never use this deadly technique. To unlock all of a gods power is a huge taboo and should never be allowed to be done. Because every time you unlock all your godly power, it diminishes the god’s life form till a god is no longer a god, but just mortal.”

A twig then snapped in the forest and Zeus quickly came to from his memories.

“I hope you did not think it was over.” Canos said the dark part of the forest.

“Yeah, after all we are just getting started. Kronos said right behind his brother. The two walked into the light and Zeus seen them. They had on their mask and all their wounds had disappeared.

Zeus tried to stand but Kronos moved quickly. “Titan arte: Speed X10.” Blood splatter from the left side of Zeus as he began to fall, but somehow managed to remain standing. He slapped his hands together and summoned back his bow. His magical quiver reappeared on his back and he quickly grabbed a lightning bolt and aimed at Kronos. He was sweating and breathing very hard. And make matters worse he was very unaware of his surrounding as Canos snuck up from behind and wrapped his tail around Zeus’s neck. He then sent him flying into a tree.

“Titian spell: grip of the Dark forest.” Canos said as he bald up his hand. The tree grabbed Zeus around his neck, both his arms and both legs.

Zeus struggled mightily as he tried to break away from the grasp of the tree.

“Titan spell: Ten thousand clones!” Kronos said. In a blink of an eye it went from just one Kronos to ten thousand Kronos.

Canos then walked over. “Hey Zeus, you wanna play a game? It’s called don’t die till you get stabbed ten thousand times. It’s a favorite of me and my brothers. See all you got to do is survive ten thousand stabs. If you could do that then we will end your misery and kill you.”

“Yeah but our luck sucks cause we never get to ten thousand. Hell we never make it to a thousand. They usually croak around 600 or 750.” Kronos argued.

“Well that’s not all the way true… I mean don’t you remember we did have those two beings that survived our attack.” Canos counter.

“Who?” Kronos asked.

“Well first it was that weird kid wondering around Gahanna looking for Vangoe…..what was his, Avery, Ari-”

“His name isn’t important brother, I do remember who you talking about though. He survive all the way to ten thousand and right when we was about to kill him, a giant green winged snake with legs interrupted our fun.” Kronos said as he cut his brother off.

Canos Just shrugged his shoulders as his brother looked at hm.

“Well?” Kronos asked

“Well what?” Canos inquired.

“Who was the other being of which you speak of?” Kronos now irritated by his brother asked.

“Oh, you don’t remember? It was that kid; he had the eye patch…a Mohawk, black guy. You know Kronos he could do that funny shit with his eyes just like the black reaper…you know what I am talking about. His eyes had changed to a bright red color ad these weird looking box shits tart to formulate around his pulpal. Once that happens it looks like he has a flower in his eye.” Canos explained.

“Of course, how could I forget? He was the one who still had energy to fight after ten thousand stabs.” Kronos said as he began to remember the kid.

“Yep, and he kicked yo ass on top of that.” Canos laughed.

“Hey I was caught off guard….I had no idea that he was that powerful.” Kronos defending his pride.

“Yeah, sure ,whatever.” Canos mocked back.

“Well, that was in the past. It won’t happen again here.” Kronos howled.

“I don’t know, it could. He might have someone who will come save him.” Canos joked. He then balled up his fist and sent a rocking blow to Zeus jaw.

Blood dripped down Zeus lip as Canos held up his head.

“That's nothing to what you going to get god.” Canos said cocky.

Zeus had shot a spit of blood on the mask of Canos. Canos just laughed and said, “He’s ready let’s begin brother.

So they began to play their sick twisted game. One stab after another, the next stabbed a little more painful than the next. However Zeus never screamed out in pain, or moan. All he did was shed tears as the attacks got more and more vicious.

“Well now……I will be damned. He is on stab 9900, and not so much as a peep from him. He is a strong one.” Canos said as he took his claws and dug them into Zeus chest and began to scrape down Zeus body. Zeus still did not make noise as the tears began to run down his face heavier. The tears began to mix with the blood. As they continued down Zeus’s body.

Another clone came to stab Zeus, when a needle came through and hit the clone smack dab in the middle of its head. It began to fall back before it disappeared. All the clones looked up in the direction of which the needle had come from. Birds took off out the trees when exactly 1000 needle simultaneously came out of nowhere and destroyed a thousand clones at one time.

“The attacks are coming from the trees above!” Canos yelled.

“Retreat!” The original Kronos yelled as he, his brother, and the clones began to run. Needle attacks came in bunches as it picked off 3 to 4 clones at a time. Two needles came down and stuck the tree which was holding Zeus and broke its grip around his two arms. He managed to grab a clone and took a deep breath.

“Olympian magic: Thundering blow.” He then swung with all his might and punch the clone in the center of its mask. The mask shattered before the clone disappeared. With his last bit of strength Zeus broke the branch that still had him round his neck. He was breathing heavy as he tried to take a step forward but was falling instead. He was caught by what seemed to be a boy. Zeus vision was blurry and kept going in and out as he fought his desire to just pass out. He came to notice that the boy that was holding him was in fact a demon with green horns and four tails. A woman then landed in front of them. She was wearing a white hoodie, a pair of black tights, with some all-white Nikes. She had on white lipstick on and her eyes were silver, and the left side of her head was shaved while her hair on the right was still long. She had five tails behind her.

“Reload.” The green horn demon said.

“Yes, Explosior. We still have enemies out here. I couldn’t kill every clone.” Reload reported.

That’s when a clone came out of the shadows and was going to strike Reload.

“Look out!” Zeus yelled as he felt he body being thrown in the air. He looked down and the demon boy who was holding him was gone. Blood splattered on Explosior’s face. It was coming from his hand which he used to block Reload’s attacker from executing his attack on Reload. He gripped the attacker’s hand.

“What kind of man, man your mother never taught you not to attack a defenseless woman? To think and you call yourself a man… man you know what be gone.” Explosior said as he put his hand on the clones head.

“Demonic art: Organ explosion.” Explosior said as he threw the clone across the field. The clone floated a couple of feet in the air a couple of feet before exploding.

Reload quickly grabbed Explosior. “Explosior!” She yelled frantically, as she checked her brother’s body.

“Oh Reload, I am fine. All I got is this little scratch on my hand see.” Explosior laughed as he showed her wound on his hand. He began rub the back of his head with the other hand. That’s when Reload hit him on top of his head.

“Ouch Reload, what hell? Why you hit me.?” Explosior asked angrily.

“Cause of that.” Reload said as she pointed to Explosior side. He looked down and seen one of his sister’s needles in his side. The needle wasn’t that deep in but it had a little green ball on top of it and it pulsated regularly.

“What the hell, Reload you stabbed me with your needle? How could you I am your youngest brother. You are my favorite sibling out of other three… I just can’t believe you would try to kill me.” He sobbed as tears began to run down his face. Reload struck her brother once more. He winced in pain and rubbed the spot where she hit him at.

“You moron, this was your fault. How dare you try to make me feel guilty for what the hell you done? Aint nobody tell you to be Mr. Super save a hoe.” Reload fussed back at her little brother.

“But I didn’t know you were fine I just knew you were being attacked by that Titian clone and I just wanted to save you.” Explosior cried.

“Well next time look before you move!” Reload said as she gave her little brother another punch to the back of his head.

“Owe!” Explosior wailed. Zeus body finally came back down as he hit the ground hard. Both Explosior and Reload stopped their fussing and looked at the Olympian god.

“Hey don’t look so-“

“Explosior no wait!” Reload yelled but it was too late. Explosior buckled to his knees and began to sweat. His breathing became heavy and his body was becoming extremely hot.

“What’s wrong with me?” Explosior thought as he gripped the grass under his hand tight.

“You moron I told you, you are under my spell, leech of life. Your body is virtually useless in this state.” Reload explained. That’s when the twins and the clone army came out of hiding.

“Well boys it’s just our luck. We have an unconscious god, an already beaten demon prince, and weak demon princess. This should be easy.” Canos Rallied as he put one hand in the air. The Kronos clones roared. Reload grabbed two needles and Explosior looked back at the clones with extreme exhaustion.

Back at the church…………………………………………………

Both Satan Jr. and Hercules were going at it. Hercules swung a back hand with tremendous force but Satan Jr. was able to dodge it with easy.

“Now go Omanga!” Satan Jr. commanded of his pet snake. Omanga moved quickly as he continuously trying to bite Hercules. Hercules however was just too fast for poor Omanga as he dodged every time Omanga’s jaws try to get the clamp on him.

“Ooo, you good dodging punk dodge thisss.” Omanga hissed as he started to cast his magic. “Demonic pet arte: Poison gas.” Omanga shot gas out of his mouth and it began to flood the ground air space. That’s when Hercules flapped his wings once and got above the poisonous gas. Once he was high enough he looked down, and to his surprise the gas began to vanish. He looked around for the reason why and quickly found his answer. Satan Jr. was sucking up all the poison into his mouth.

“Demonic arte: Poison cannon.” He said as he began to spit out giant purple balls of gas at Hercules. Hercules began to dodge the Poisonous gas balls but got hit once on his leg. He winced in pain as he watched his tan leg turn dark purple. Then another one hit his wing, turning it from white to black in a blink of an eye. Hercules began to fall back to the earth when Satan Jr. spoke.

“Omanga, go claim our prize.”

“Yass, master.” Omanga hissed as he quickly slithered over to Hercules. But even in pain and in danger Hercules did not panic. He closed his eyes for a second and put his hands together.

“What is he doing?” Satan Jr. wondered as he watched Hercules from a distance. Right when Omanga coiled up and lunged at Hercules, is when Hercules opened his eyes and screamed mightily as blue flames shot around his body. Omanga got burned pretty badly and hurry to slither away. Hercules leg and wings turned back to their original color and Satan Jr. just looked in pure awe.

“But how is this possible. Only Satan’s children have the power over the flames so how can this angel have that type of power?” Satan Jr. asked aloud. In a blink of an eye Hercules was right there beside Satan Jr.

“You are wrong Satan Jr. It is true that only you and your siblings have the power to control all the other flames but how do you think ya’ll ended up with ya’ll flames. It was derived from your fathers blue flame, but how did he get his blue flame? See this is what you didn’t know; every creature ever made by god has a flame inside of them. Even mortal men do, how do you think they become exorcist, demon slayers or even heaven praiser? Hell some even go beyond that point. You know you have met a couple of them. I think there called Buddha bladders. Humans who has reached enlightenment even without God’s blessing. Now those are extraordinary people by far.” Hercules explained.

Satan Jr. was fixing his mouth to say something but Hercules without hesitation extended his arm and punched Satan Jr. dead in his face. Satan Jr. went tumbling backwards as Hercules toss his blade, Dremon, in the air and began to run towards Satan Jr. Satan Jr finally stop rolling and looked up. He saw Dremon coming straight down for him. Hercules then jumped up in the air and caught hold onto Dremon.

“This is where you die.” He said as he began to drive Dremon directly at Satan Jr. Blood splatter everywhere as the once worried Satan Jr grew a huge smile on his face.

“Great timing Jugo.” Satan Jr. praised.

Jugo stood in front of him with bruises and cut marks and burned marks all over his body. Hercules just looked in disbelief, not because Jugo was alive but because it was Déjà vu all over again. His Dremon had pierced the same hand of Jugo’s it did back in Nirvana. Blood dripped down his hand but he never winced, yelled out in pain, nor show any feared. His eyes as cold as ever were locked on to Hercules. Hercules could feel his frustration taking over. “Why are you staring at me? Why are you staring at me?!” He yelled as he began to stab Jugo all over his body. Blood poured out every inch of Jugo’s body as Hercules try to make an advance pass him, but Jugo’s hand gripped the side of Hercules face. Hercules could feel the blood on Jugo hand from the wound he inflicted on it.

“Hell raiser magic: Partial demonic soul left hand.” His hand transformed into a big black hand with claws as it extended itself till Hercules cashed into a car. The car sirens went off as Hercules coughed up blood.

“Yes Jugo make him suffer.” Satan Jr. smiled as Jugo walked over to the badly hurt Hercules. Hercules crawling trying to get up when Jugo stuck his left demonic arm up in the air. It grew 5 times as big as Jugo slammed it down on both of Hercules legs.

Hercules screamed out in pain and agony. Jugo then removed his hand and Hercules looked back. He seen the blood running down his leg and he knew right then that every bone is his body was broken. As Jugo walked towards Hercules, Hercules could feel it. For the first time in his entire existence he felt Helpless.

Jugo stood over Hercules immobile body as tears ran down Hercules face. “No, I don’t wanna die.” Hercules thought as Jugo picked him up with his right hand. He then tossed him in air and smacked him with his demonic left hand and sent him flying. He went crashing through the roof of the church and had lost all consciousness. His body came tumbling back to earth when he was caught by a large man. He had on a black trench Jacket, white collar shirt, black slacks, gold and black Stacy Adams, gold scarf and gold and black fedora on his head. He also where wearing a pair of black gloves with gold stars on each knuckle. The large man looked back. Hey you angel, catch. The large man said as he threw Hercules in the air. A little boy with blonde hair and pink eyes appeared.

“You know I am a not an angel I am a Zodiac.” The little blonde hair boy spoke.

“You know I really don’t care right. You all work for my grandfather and you all look the same to me.” The large man said.

The small blonde hair child just smiled and said, “I hope God gives us permission to start back killing demons again, because if he does you will be the first I will kill.”

The large man just smiled, “Hey kid, I anit no push over…..For me you will need all the angels, a miracle from Jesus, a lil Wayne cd, and then a blessing from god himself. And all of that still might not be enough.”

“Oh yeah like you are that powerful.” The blonde hair kid picked.

“Well I hate to brag but…” The large man began to say. He’s body then had an immense golden glow around it as the air around them change.

Satan Jr. began to clap. Well I’ll be damn, if isn’t the strongest demon to ever live, here to see me? Man father must not like you…..he could have at least sent Igtytous but you…this is too funny.” Satan Jr. laughed hard.

“Yeah I kind of felt the same way but Igtytous insisted that I come here. He said something about going to put down an escaped convict from hell.” The large man said.

Satan Jr. quickly stopped laughing and looked at the large man. “Well I guess that just means that we will need to kill you quickly so we can go give her a hand.”

The large man just smiled as he took off his jacket. He then closed his eyes as he took off his hat. You could see that he had two very bright gold horns sitting on top of his head.

Jugo swung his demon hand at the large man who still anit open his eyes yet but sill able to catch the punch.

“Well now where are your manners at? You didn’t even ask me my name nor give your name. Jesus, I can tell you are a friend of my brothers.” The large demon man said as he opened his eyes. He and Jugo eyes connected for a while before he spoke again. “My name is Viss, yours?”

Jugo did not answer. “Fine have your away, but I thought I could at least learn the name of the being I am about to kill.” Viss said as he yanked Jugo towards him. Jugo body came flying across the parking lot. Viss then threw a mean elbow, but Jugo blocked it with his right hand. Jugo quickly attacked again. He sent a right knee shot at Viss, but Viss, still holding Jugo’s Demon hand, just took his other hand and shoved it into Jugo’s right knee. He pushed his knee so hard that Jugo whole body flipped over Viss in the air. As Jugo was coming down Viss sent Jugo another elbow to the chest. It connected and Jugo hit the ground ever so hard. As concrete and dirty debris jumped up on Viss’s slacks. Viss smacked his lips but took his hand and knocked the dirt and concrete off his slacks. He tried to walk away when he felt something tugging on his pants. He looked back,

“You still can move?” Viss asked as he bald up his fist. He then swung down with tremendous force. His fist never hit Jugo, but the force from him swinging buried Jugo to the point you could not see him.

Viss then clapped his hands together for a moment before looking at his brother. “Then there was only one.” He said.

“Oh, brother I wouldn’t underestimate my esteemed peer. See what I just learned about this being is well, he doesn’t quiet no how to stop, or better yet die…so yeah I would stay on my toes if I was you.” Satan Jr. warned with a smile.

“Trust me he’s not-”

The ground began to shake as a giant Black Hand popped out of the ground. And it tried to smack Viss into the ground but he dodged the attack, but Jugo then appeared behind Viss. Before Viss could react Jugo smacked him with his demon hand and sent him flying into the church.

“I told you, not underestimate him.” Satan Jr. shrugged his shoulders.

Laughter came out of the church as Viss came out. He rolled up his sleeves as he rubbed the top right side of his forehead. It was bleeding and he wiped some of it off. Well now your rude friend might be more fun than I first thought.”

Jugo and Viss exchanged looks before both charging at each other.

Back over in the city…………………………………………………………………

Ayokio and the red horn demon were going at it at high speed as Deception just watched.

“Wow, so this is the red horn demon known as Igtytous… He’s very powerful indeed. I can see how you lost to you brother Satan Jr.” Deception said as she followed the fight with her eyes.

Igtytous came sliding across the street, as he summoned two fireballs two his hand and touched the street. Fire shot up from under the street as it hit Ayokio. It burned her so badly it forced her back to car form. The card fluttered back to Deception as she caught it.

“Take a rest Ms. Ayokio, you have earned it. Deception then looked at Igtytous as he not turned and looked at her.

“Are you the one call Igtytous?” She asked looking at the demon man.

“Depends are you the damned soul that broke out of hell known as Deception?” Igtytous answered back with a question.

“What if I am?” she inquired.

In a blink of an eye Igtytous moved beside her. “Then of course I will have to take you back there.” He answered.

Deception just closed her eyes and smiled. “Well I am sorry to disappoint but I don’t plan to go back. I am going to reach Utopia and live there peacefully.”

She then swung at Igtytous who dodged her punch. She continuously attacked him as he bobbed and weave every last of them till he finally blocked one punch and sent her falling forward. He then side stepped and then grabbed her by her hair and sent her flying backwards. She tumbled a couple of times before finally stopping. She looked around trying to find Igtytous.

“Defying me is futile. If you continue this I will use force.” Igtytous voice said from behind her.

She cut her eyes back, and smiled. “Well, I for one love to be abuse so come at me with everything you got daddy.” She then turned around and jumped back to create space in between her and Igtytous.

She closed her eyes as a black aura began to surround her body. “I haven’t had to assume this form in a while, so forgive me if I am a little over whelming at first.” She said as her body began to change. She grew three horns, with five tails. Her skin turn grey as she only opened her left eye. Her eye changed from ocean blue to dark red and she had a pupil now. It was one small dot with weird shapes circling her pupil, making it look like there was a flower in her right eye. “Well now I knew you were cute but damn you fine. And your hair is so long. I am sorry to be all over you like this but this is the first time in a long time since my vision came back. I can only see things when I use this eye.” She explained. She then looked over to Percy. “Wow you are cute to.” She said as she waved at Percy.

Igtytous looked at her for a moment before saying anything.

“Are you a Kindheart descendent?” He asked.

“Why do you asked?” Deception answered back with her own question.

“Because, you have the eye of a Kindheart. One of my masters, Vangoe, is a Kindheart and he said that his father killed every Kindheart there was except him as his brother, and yet you have an eye.” Igtytous explained.

“Well now, aren’t you an impressive detective.” Deception mocked.

Igtytous grabbed the handle of his blade that was on his back. He quickly moved as he charged Deception. She dodged his attack and then countered by using her tails to attack him. He took his sword and blocked his sword. He parried the attack but that left him wide open as Deception charged him. She took her hand and grabbed him by his face, railing him into a car on the street. She smiled as she watched Igtytous set up. He wiped blood from his mouth as He and she had a Mexican standoff. They then Charged each other as they causing mass destruction all over the downtown area of this city sending each other through buildings. Igtytous went flying backwards as he tried to regain his composure. He saw Deception coming at full speed from out the air. He took his left leg and did a half circle. That’s when winds began to circle around his body. He then summoned a fireball to each hand and extended them outward as fire combined with the winds and created a sparling fire wind attack that was directed at Deception. She could not dodge the attack so tried to block it. The attack impacted her and sent her flying to the ground hard. She crashed landed on top of a car as surrounding buildings, nearby cars, and even the street itself was on fire. H

Deception rolled off the car. Her arms was badly injured and burned and she could hardly breathe as she watched Igtytous walk towards her.

“There is a reason for every question I asked and whether or not you have just answered the one I just asked you. You see I know that you are not a Kindheart now.”

“Oh yeah and how can you tell that?” Deception asked.

“You mean besides the dumbfounded look on your face? Well like I said one of my teachers is a Kindheart. He explained that most Kindheart warriors will receive the eye by 7 and late bloomers at 10. You are 28, so this could be true for you, however he goes on to explain that any Kindheart clan member who shows the trait of Oë van truuks, even the smallest then they are train to handle their powers, so they don’t over exert them self.”

“Your point?” Deception asked.

“Hm, you really haven’t notice yet have you? The fact your eye has already changed back.” Igtytous pointed out.

That’s when Deception noticed that her vision was gone once more. The handsome young man she seen at first had disappeared and all she can see again was the aura around his body.

“When, when did I lose my sight again?” Deception thought as she began to grab her hair. “I am in the dark again, I can’t see anyone.”

Igtytous then took a step forward and Deception then looked up. Igtytous could see it all over her face. She was terrified, and had the right to be. She quickly got up and moved backwards.

“Sta-stay back!” She cried as she drew a card and was about to summoned it when her hand was caught. She looked left and seen Igtytous Aura right there.

“It’s over.” He said calmly as he put his blade in the air. He then swung down and Deception closed her eyes awaiting the final blow but when she reopened her eyes she notice she was in the arms of an angel. He had blonde hair and a blonde beard and ocean blue eyes. He had four wings and four arms.

“Wächter Verlorene Liebe.” Deception said softly.

“At your service my lady.” Wächter Verlorene Liebe answered back.

Deception smiled for a second but quickly got worried. “Wait if you are here…” She began as she looked over Wächter Verlorene Liebe, shoulder she could barely see it but she quickly spotted Igtytous aura. He went sliding back on his heels as ears began to bleed ridiculously. That’s when a young boy landed a couple of feet in front of him.

“Bain, you are here.” Deception said to herself.

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Holysocks
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Holysocks wrote a review Review · Jun 1, 2016

Hey there! I thought I'd boot this out of the Green Room for you. I haven't read the three chapters before this so please bare with me.

This is an interesting concept, from what I've read. I'm not a huge fan of all different types of gods but still there's lots of people who are. I'm not sure if this is what you're going for, but I could see this being a very humour-full novel! It's just set up perfect with all the gods and saints and all kinds of culture stuff that just gives you so many opportunities to lace it with funny stuff.

"...Jesus please just give him the chance to avenge his brother death.”


I love this because it sounds like he's praying. See what I mean about the perfect set-up for funny stuff? ;)

Alrighty, so. You have 13,313 words here. I know that because I counted them one by one. Just kidding, I used a word counter. STILL that is a LOT of words, and although I applaud you for writing all those (seriously, congratulations, that's a good chunk right there and not everyone can stay focused on one thing for that long), that's still far too much for me to read in one sitting. You will have a hell of a lot more people reading and reviewing/commenting on your works if you keep them down to 2000 - 3000 words per post. If it's points your concerned about because maybe you're having trouble reviewing, let me know! I'm always willing to give pointers or advice. There's also lots of sources I can give you. Reviewing is hard and we've all been at the point where we're not sure how to review or if our reviews are good enough, so if you're going through that, by all means let me know.

The other thing I wanted to talk about is your dialogue. Not so much your dialogue as much as the amount of your dialogue. Wow, I'm terrible today, aren't I- too much of this, too much of thaaat. ;) No, I mean it's not that you write too much dialogue (I don't believe there's such thing), it's that your character's are saying things so fast that we don't really catch onto what's happening. In fact, I still have no idea where your characters are. It's entirely possible that you let us know that, but I feel like there's so much going on that we don't really notice. Maybe slow down a bit? With so many characters being referenced and so many voices and things happening, it makes it very confusing and hard to follow. Let us take a breather and let us know what's happening, how the character's feel about things, etc.

“But Herc, I thought god told us not to kill Satan Jr.”


I like this line, too. Another brilliant example of how you can use modern knowledge to your advantage in making this a funny read. Because here we have people talking about how god literally told them not to do something, and in modern day you'll have people going god told me this!. Much potential.

Anyway, I hope you continue to write this! Keep it up!

-Socks

Lol this is by far the best review I read on my story. I like it because you just didn't harshly criticize my story you told me what you liked about it and you was generally nice when you pointed out my flaws. I will try to cut back on the word count, but its so hard cause so much happens in a chapter in this book anyway vs some of my other books. This one might be by far the most action packed book I wrote. Thanks again socks

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Mea wrote a review Review · May 29, 2016

Hey there, I'm back again because I thought why not, I might as well get one more review in before I head off for the day.

Anyway, a lot of the things I said in my last review apply to this chapter. I'm starting to understand how all these mythology figures play together, but it's still a bit confusing. I'm also not actually clear whose head we're in a lot of the time - you seem to jump around a lot, showing the thoughts of several different characters. That's omniscient viewpoint, but you're acting like it's third person limited, showing all the character's thoughts as if they were telling the story, not some eye in the sky telling the story. I'd recommend limiting the number of times you switch the point of view of the story, because it gets confusing quickly, especially when you switch without a scene break.

Also, setting. Setting is key. For all I know most of these characters are talking/fighting in a white, empty room. Please, please describe the scenery and where the characters are in relation to it. It's a lot less confusing and more interesting if the readers can picture where the characters are.

You still have a lot of grammar and spelling errors - watch out for those. If you aren't really sure of some rules of grammar, well, we have an entire forums section devoted to helping you out with that: Grammar & Research. Also, break up several of your longer paragraphs - they're a lot easier to read that way.

The last thing I'll say is that there were parts where your dialogue felt awkward and unrealistic. Dialogue is really hard to write right, but a good trick is to read it out loud, and if it sounds like something nobody would say, then there's probably something wrong.

That's all I've got! Keep writing!

Hey once again thanks, but Meanbooks I will say I do tell where everyone is at and where they are fighting. I will admit though i have no idea how to do a scene break so I can see how you would get confuse there. (If you do please help me.) A lot of things you all count as a misspell I do on purpose to protray the type of speach a person has in the story. Like for instances I say pencil, however my cousin puts an r there making it perncil. I now that's not right and when she spells it she spells it right, but its how she talks that shows her speech and that's what I go for in my story. Thanks again.

Mea replied · May 31, 2016

No problem!

A scene break is just when the scene changes. Think in a movie, when it fades to black for a second, then when it comes back we're in a different location, possibly with different characters. In writing, it's usually just shown by putting a couple of extra spaces in between the last line of the first scene and the first line of the new one.



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