Incredible. I could stop here but I won't. Honestly though, this was well done, well done! The mood you created here was very unique me that ending line of yours hit me hard with emotions. I know how it feels to be crushed by a boy and have him look down upon yourself. Also in the scenarios above, they didn't relate to me, but I have close friends who are exact images of the stanzas. That's the thing about poetry is that I can connect you with someone and share a mindset of similarities. This was just great and I hope I can see some of your future work!
There were no flaws at all so yay you! Please keep writing! I enjoy works!
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