Hey! IamTraunt here!
So, I did my research:
a humorous, frequently bawdy, verse of three long and two short lines rhyming aabba
I find this short, but quote witty. You really link this back to real life as many pedophilic people roam the streets, the parks, even cafés, theme parks and shopping malls - which very concerning. I like how also cut off your 'I' at the beginning in Stanza 1, Line 1 as it make me think of a casual, slang talking person talking in a bawdy way (dealing with sexual matters in a comical way; humorous). You put the point across, not in a formal way, but an informal way which was clear and understandable.
Well done, Raven. Great job!
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