Hi, hope you find my review helpful. A well- written poem with a very original idea. It is not often that people consider the disadvantages of being a smart person and fit it so well in a poem. A really sad poem- how could the guy have murdered the incredibely sweet girl.( but not so sweet at the end) My favourite stanza was:
"Those times we've had.
Didn't you notice my blush?
Okay, I guess you did not,
so sure, I had a huge crush."
i also think that some stanzas were forced so you could work on that. And, some stanzas sounded awkward.
Overall, a very nice,sad poem. Hope to read more of your work soon.
- Anshira, Red team
Points: 747
Reviews: 103
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