Hey! CTW!! (IS FINALLY READING YOUR POEM)
Than those of a stereotyped teen.
Stereotyped is jackin' yo flow homeskillit! How 'bout varying the word length more so it don't look like such a big jump, fo' sho! Cuz all the synonyms are too cliche in poetry! Feel me brohan?
changing the world
Lovin' the name reference guurrll!!
Oceans only get made by small drops,
And they add up, it’s just that simple.
Yo! The meaning in these here lines is off the chain! But the execution dizzled me a bit fo sho.
I would make a suggeston' to try dis shnizz:
"Oceans consist of the smallest drops. They sum to completion. It's simple."
See I tried to keep with tha' short-short-long word a-rhythm yous gots goin' on there.
I dig the meanin' behind this here poem, and am goin to ask you to write A-more afte' NaNo!
HOPE YOU ENJOYED THIS STRANGE REVIEW <3
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