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Chapter 1: Things change

Jack Diamond’s sudden interest in a patient is making his fans suspicious. Has the great doctor found his love or is it just rumors?

Channel change.

Jack Diamond was seen in a bar yesterday and was completely drunk…

Channel change.

Jack Diamond caught crying in the hospital…

“What the hell is this? All channels are talking about you. Do you have any idea how much loss this can bring us in? When will you grow up, Jack? This is it! The bet is off, you are not treating this patient anymore. Do you get that?” Andrew shouts at his small brother, specially stressing on the word ‘not’. Well, he had all the rights to shout on him as Jack hadn't done the best of the things in these few days, this week to be more specific after the bet they had a week ago, to treat this ‘un-treatable’ patient according to Andrew, who had been in their hospital since years.

The bet was simple, if Jack would be able to treat the patient then Andrew will have to ask a girl he has been stalking and crushing on since the fourth grade out and if he loses then Andrew doesn't do it. Jack mainly did this for his brother and there was no way he would back down on this one. At first it was only that but when Jack saw the patient there became more reasons why Jack wanted to treat this patient, she was someone special.

Drew, that’s what Jack called him, was a twenty-seven year old man who was very stubborn(just like his younger brother) and had a businessman like nature. Well unlike his small brother, Drew had over thinking issues. The main reason why he couldn't ask that girl out yet. He had called Jack in the conference room this morning just to come and see the news, wow some nice thing to wake your brother so early for! Jack had thought after seeing the news. Bored by his talk Jack sat on the table fixing his white coat which he wore in a hurry above his blue jeans and black shirt.

Don’t blame him for such an appearance in the hospital, this guy woke him up at 5 in the morning after Jack had barely got any sleep because of the last operation. Drew stood angrily glaring at Jack like he was going to burn him down into ashes by just staring, which would have worked. But hey! He was the one I should be angry on, not vise versa. Jack thought to himself.

“Look. We both know that once I take a decision no one can change it, so why waste time, just get along with it and I can promise you for staying out of the spotlight until I try to fix her” Drew narrowed his eyes at the word ‘fix’ but Jack ignored him. He couldn't possibly think that Jack could use any more of a sensible word while he was still half asleep could he?

“I am not giving you an option here. You are not going to be treating her. Why do you ever care about her so much? She doesn't talk to anyone or look at anyone; damn she doesn’t even walk until it is utterly necessary”

“Exactly, why I want to treat her” Jack replied simply. Lie, a big one. There was more to it than drew could ever imagine. This got Drew angrier and he stomped the table making Jack jerk a little bit. If someone wanted to die soon by a heart attack, do visit the Diamond brothers, specially Drew. He is really good at shocking people, his best specialty. Like good with an extra ‘wow’ in it.

“Others can treat her too, you are not the only doctor here” he shouted at his younger brother. Like shouting would do any effect.

“Others have been treating her from 2 years Drew, 2 YEARS and did you see her condition? If she stay’s like this for one more month she might actually die. She has grown so weak because she rarely eats; she is living the life of a dead person Drew. Hell I don’t even know whether she is breathing or not sometimes and… Wasn't this the reason why you asked me to look into this case before?”

“Yes, but now, I want you to stop. No need to be involved into this, let the others handle it, there are many good doctors here.” Jack groaned and Drew became more furious as he continued speaking ignoring Jack in the best way he could “I don't get it. Why do you care about that bitch so much?” and that’s when Jack punched him. Drew had it coming and he knew that too.

“No one” he paused “No one can call her a bitch and listen up Drew, this hospital belongs to me as much as it belongs to you so I don't give a damn about what you say because one thing is set, I am going to and I will treat her even if I hole comes out of nowhere and sucks me in it.” And saying this he stomped out of the room closing the door with a thud. Okay maybe the last statement wasn't the best but trust me, Jack saying this was like a miracle. He barely gets angry but very unlike himself, when someone says anything about her then there is no edge to his anger. He goes on boiling mood or whatever you call that.

“Satine, that’s what her name is and nobody, expect for me, can ever say her anything like that. Nobody, except for me, can hurt her. Nobody, except for me, can turn her back into what she was and I know that very clearly.” Jack thought to himself, he had always been like this, since the first day they met till now. Possessive, stubborn and a complete idiot, okay maybe the last part is a little incorrect but anyways. Sorrow crossed over his face as he remembered how she was.

“Did you hear about the new transfer student?” I heard a girl say as I entered my high school. It was my first day to senior year and I was as dull as anyone could possibly be. Not really that popular in school but I had liked it that way. Trust me, in my school, you would want to be invisible instead of been popular because what happened with popular kids, you don’t even want to know. But yeah, enmity was always the key.

“Yes, she is so going to beat Jessie. I mean she is so amazing, I am totally voting for her as the prom queen” Yes, right. I rolled me eyes as I walked past them, do these girls have nothing else to do? In the end of the year the prom was healed and from the first day till the last, people spoke about it. Wait let me correct that, ‘girls’ spoke about it. I walked towards my locker and when I reached it, the bell rang. Late to the first class on the first day, that’s me.

As I opened it a girl came beside me and started staring at me. She wore a blue demon jacket on a white strapless shirt and a mini skirt which was torn from down. Her black hair gave her look and extra ‘wow’ and while I took my books out of the locker she caught the locker’s door.

“Hey, my name is Satine and you are?” she asked. There was a great glow is her violet eyes like she was waiting for something in particular to happen. I heard giggling voices as she spoke to me and I could see that she was making her best effort to control her laughter. That time I wondered why.

“Jack” I said closing the locker. And then it hit me, I tried to remove my hand of it but couldn’t, she was putting glue on my locker, how mature! Then she burst out laughing and a couple more girls and started to walk off shouting “Pranked!” and I just stood there bewildered. I thought and I laughed at what exactly happened. That day was the first time in my life I got detention for a thing I wasn’t to be blamed on. Yup, that day was the first time I met her.

She was a person like that and he was a person like this.

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Okay, yes I was writing the story love but than I wanted to write something different and not so common so I sat for 2 weeks thought, thought and thought and than this hit me. Like really, it really ‘HIT’ me XD So people, be free to comment like or review. Comments work too as I would like to know your opinion (it is very important) and then everyone is always welcome to correct my mistakes ;)

Link to CH 2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=103125