Timmy here for a quick review!!
So first I will just mention that you turned the most common idea ever written and changed it into your own amazing idea... Knives cutting skin... The most common idea ever, but not this poem! This is an amazing poem, just morphing the idea into the opposite of what most people do.
Nitpicks
was just seven words. ---Bolded word should be were
Faving time and style
So that was all I had for nitpicks! This was a wonderful poem!!
I love how you made this so... How do I say this? Unpoetic.. There we go. This was an unpoetic poem.. There were no fancy words nor vivid descriptions. It was simple. But in many cases, simplicity is the best. This was one of them.
I know I have said this many times before in this poem, but you have turned a boring common idea to an original clever idea... And that is why this poem is amazing... Its like you are talking to us in this poem. Talking to me!
I agree. Blades are definitely for cutting cake.
~Darth Timmyjake
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