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Thu Nov 11, 2010 4:51 am
IgnisandGlacialis says...



*timidly raises hand*
Moi?
I understand if you don't want to do this, I know it looks a little intimidating ... and it's already had quite a few comments. So, if you have time ... Unless you've already read it, of course? In which case tell me and nothing more shall be said. :D Oh, and just letting you know - it's not as long as it looks. The main part of that space is taken up by reviews.
Here's the link:
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Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:15 pm
Button says...



Hi there... again. Yes. I'm evil. This is my second post on here. Please don't attack me. *cowers*


Anywho- if you're bored, or if you have oodles and noodles of time, could you please review this? Or just take a look at it or something? I'd super duper appreciate it. :)

First chapter of a novel I'm starting: topic71872.html


Thank you SO ridiculously much. c:

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Sun Nov 14, 2010 10:18 pm
Tigersprite says...



Done Ignis! Great story by the way! :D Will do yours first thing tomorrow Persephoneia; because I can only imagine what'll happen if my mum catches me up past 10:00 on a Sunday night.
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Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:46 pm
Sins says...



*Bows* May I borrow your Fantasy expertness...?

Would you review the prologue of my novel for me, Tiger? :)

topic71938.html

I think you know which one it is! It's my first go at writing in third person, so I need to know if I'm doing an okay job at it so far. Please and thank you!
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Mon Nov 15, 2010 9:50 pm
Tigersprite says...



All done Persephoneia and Skins! :D Anyone else?
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Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:17 pm
Threnody says...



Hey!

Could you please review this poem?

topic71973.html

Thanks!!

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Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:33 am
SilentRain says...



Hello!
I have a poem here for you
topic72067.html
Thanks!
~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Tue Nov 16, 2010 6:48 pm
Tigersprite says...



All done Forever Threnody and SilentRain! Anyone else?
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Mon Nov 22, 2010 10:07 am
Jashael says...



I'm a fan. *ehem* LOL

topic70345.html review please? =))))
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Mon Nov 22, 2010 4:44 pm
Button says...



GAAAH.
I'm a terrible person. This is my third post in here.
It's not my fault you give some ridiculously fantastic reviews!

Anywho. If you have the time, would you mind glancing at this: topic72242.html ?

I'd superduperluper appreciate it. Thanks :D

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Mon Nov 22, 2010 5:50 pm
Tigersprite says...



Done Persephoneia! Getting to yours now Jash!
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Mon Nov 29, 2010 1:52 am
Jashael says...



last one. =) topic71543.html hahaha
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Mon Nov 29, 2010 7:01 pm
Tigersprite says...



Okay, will get to Jash! :D
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Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:00 pm
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SilentRain says...



Hello,
topic72562.html
Poem

Thanks!

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Tue Nov 30, 2010 4:29 am
KatTrain says...



topic72540.html

Please review my poem 'Paradise Lost'
Thanks!
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