Young Writers Society

Hi, I'm new here and thought this would be a good idea to see what's out there. I'll review almost anything, except whole novels and things that fit under the Romance forum. I don't mind a little romance, but not if your whole story's about it. I think I'm better at reviewing nonfiction works because I'm a college student and I'm writing a lot of papers myself, so I kind of know what teachers want.
Here are some samples of my critiques. I try to be really through. I apologize if it takes a while for me to get back to you. I'll try to be quick, but I have classes to go to and papers to write. I will send you a message saying that I'm looking at your work and am in the process of giving you a review. I don't want food, but I would like it if you could review any of my work. For my novel, I have summaries of the preceding chapters, so you don't really have to read them. It doesn't have to be in-depth, just let me know what you thought about it. Although, you don't have to. Thank you and I look forward to seeing your work!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post778186.html#p778186
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post777370.html#p777370
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post777853.html#p777853

My work(please read the note first before you start, if you're doing chapter one of the novel) You can rewiew either of these if you want. The second link's a little shorter. The first links to my novel.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=731
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71210

Hi. Could you review this poem for me? I'm pretty sure it falls under the category of 'almost anything.'

viewtopic.php?t=70928

Sure, I'll give it to you soon.

I have a poem? topic71190.html

It's done. I hope it helped.

And I have a novella... topic71029.html thriller mriller... somes sci-fiski... and stufski...

I am in the process of editing it, but since it's a novella it will take some time. Sorry about that.

Editing it? Wowie Just keep in mind, I'd be more that happy with a general overview, and one or two random chapters under a microscope will be enough to show what and where are the general trip-ups for me to look for later. Unless you've decided to do a full editing as a way to upgrade your skills, there's no need to go in with both feet. Whatever you chooseski

I got into the habit of editing things since I'm in college and we have a ton of papers to write. It's a way to refine my skills and , as I said, it's a habit.

Arrr, good to know, arrr

Need a review for my poem- Memory of You
post778159.html#p778159

napalmerski, your review is done. spike71294, I'm looking at your poem and will give you the rewiew soon.

spike71294 your review is done. I hope it helped.

I have another poem....topic71272.html

Yay! This means you like my reviews! I will get to yours as soon as I can. Which will probably be some time tomorrow. Sorry for the wait.