Young Writers Society

Hello, I’m Roon! I want to improve my review skills, help people with their writing, study other people’s writing styles, etc! that’s why I’m posting, I’d really like to have something to do with all this time I have on my hands, and for the reasons listed above I chose to post here! I know I’m not very well-known on here yet, but I would really like to help anyone who needs it!

I don't know how quickly this will get to you, as I have a lot of work to do these days, but know this : It will be done! xD

The only thing I ask is that you acknowledge you’ve read my review somehow, so that I know you know you have it!

I’m quite diligent when it comes to grammar and punctuation, I also spend a good amount of time giving you an overall thought on the piece, talking about the characters and the mood, tone, pace, etc!

I will review, literally, anything! I think that’s all I need to say is it not? I hope to be of service!

~ Roon

Hi Roon!
I'm your first customer! It's quite a big thing you know! Ahem. Anyway.

My piece is sci-fi and I'd like a review on the fourth chapter but you'll have to read the other three for the fourth to make any sense. Take as long as you like aand PM me if you don't want to review it because it's boring.

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Afeefah

Afeefah's story finished! It was wonderful, don't put your work down, I enjoyed it immensely! Any other takers?

~ Roon

Okey dokey, try this
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It's part two so you should probably read the first part also.
Thanks.

Roon:

Check out my blog. It would help if you could review/give your opinion on the first seven chapters of my novel, because soon the final five or six or so will be added to the site.

Thanks! I'll return any reviews.
kf

Okay, Pretty Crazy, your review is done! On to Flemzo's novel!

~ Roon

Hello I would really appreciate a review on the second chapter of my story, but it'll make little sense without reading the first so may have to have a quick skim over that also.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic51972.html
Thank you !

I have done parts one to six of Flemzo's novel. To be honest, today was a big day, so I didn't get as much done as I could have. All will be finished tomorrow!

~ Roon

Lyrics?
If yes, post592939.html#p592939, if not, you don't have to.

-Carly

Could you please review my poem Crying over You?

Done, done, done, more?

~ Roon

Hello Roon,
I was wondering if you could read over the first two parts of my story
A Child's Play Part One
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A Child's Play Part Two
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They are pretty dark fiction stories; in the other genre because there is no slot for horror.
Thank you so much for your time and consideration
~Meagan

Hey!
If you had the time would you mind reviewing my new poem
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post595405.html#p595405
Thanks!
X

Okay, I've reviewed Aqua's poem and chapter one of empressoftheuniverse's story, onto chapter two! Any more takers? C'mon, you know you want to!

~ Roon

I'm back from my voyage to the City of Dreaming Spires! Back to reviewing! Anyone? C'mon!

~ Roon