Young Writers Society

Hey! I recently became an instructor. What do instructors do best? Review!

I will review...

Any genre. Seriously.

On Poetry and Art

I will very hesitantly review poetry. I am not a poet.

I will definitely review art. Keep in mind a detest modern pieces.

On Fanfics

Let me say this outright. I loathe Twilight. Therefore, I do not really want to review Twilight fanfics. I will review them if the involve killing Bella.

Other Rules

I will not review if the piece is more than 3 and a half Microsoft Word Pages. If you would like me to critique a long piece, post it in parts. If you hand me 80 pages to review, I will only review about 5.

EDIT: If giving me a chapter from the middle of your story, (example: asking me to review Chapter 3) could you please give me a quick summary so I know what's going on?

How to Post

Tell me title.
Tell me the genre.
Brief summary is appreciated!
Link

If it is a Fan Fiction piece, tell me what it is based off of.

Example:

Title: Peter Pantaloon and the Rouge Marshmallow
Genre: Fantasy
Brief Summary: Peter Pantaloon is out shopping for a purple sheep. He hears a tale of the ancient Rouge Marshmallow, a giver of immortality. He goes off on a quest.
Link: youngwriterssociety.com/blahblah

Fanfic Example:

Title: Super Twilight Fanfic
Genre: Fan Fiction
Brief summary: Edward's skin stopped sparkling! Oh no! What will the Cullen's ever do?
Link: youngwriterssociety/meep

Send me links, people!

Edit: PLEASE NO MULTIPLE CHAPTER REQUESTS. After receiving requests of up to six reviews at once from one user, I have decided that multiple critiques will not be offered. If I review one of your chapters and you want a review of the others, feel free to post them ONE AT A TIME in my thread.
I will stop taking all multiple requests after Asxz's post on MARCH 1, 2009!

Thanks!

No one?

Aww...

Sakura, I've always admired your reviews and would love it if you looked at my work!

Title: Savior - Chapter 1

Genre: Other Fiction

Brief summary: Faith is surviving by herself in a trailer after a lot of the population has been wiped out by a mutating disease. (I know it sounds grim, but it gets better!)

Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic41252.html

Done!

I've never really seen somebody who'll review almost anything. This is pleasant.

Title: Writing a Letter
Genre: Other Fiction
Brief Summary: Tradition is hard to break.
Link: topic40363.html

Do you want anything in return?

Done, Vyper!

Nope, they are completely free!

Sorry, your review I wrote kind of sucks. There was nothing to nit-pick. I apologize.

Title: The Elemental Gem
Genre: Fantasy
Brief Summary: Five people go on a jourey to find a elemental gem that will save the world of Amarth from a evil mage and a shadow army.
link: topic41359.html

Be done in about fifteen minutes!

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though it's a fanfiction. All you need to know is that "Silent Hill" is a town where people's worst fears take shape.

topic40923.html

If you need to know what is happening Beth is looking for her missing sister. Right now she is currently in Silent Hill, with Sera. Sera is a really nice person who wants to help Beth, however Beth hates Sera.

prologue- Beth has a dream that her sister disappears, and it comes true

ch1- 4 years later Beth (18 years old) thinks about the past, and how no one really looked for her sister (Alex). Sera makes her appearance. It's highschool graduation day, and Beth leaves her hometown (Ashfield) and heads to Silent hill to find her sister. (Since she got a note in Alex's handwriting saying "Silent Hill").

ch2- Beth's car brakes down, and she has a strange dream. After she wakes up, Beth hitchhikes, and surprisingly Sera appears and offers her a ride. When they are driving Beth falls asleep, and has another nightmare.

ch3- topic40923.html

please review it *Begs*


title: Silent Hill Requiem

genre: horror/mystery/drama/angst

Link: Provided above

If you dont mind

Title: Running With Wolves
Genre: Adventure

topic41007.html

Maki: done!

Zoorah: working on it! *sigh* Did you not notice I asked for no more than three and half pages? Oh well...

Keep em coming!

Title: The elemental gem
genre: fantasy
summary: you know the summary
link: topic41636.html

this is the rewrite version.

Oooh... rewritten.

I'll get right to it. ^_^

Night- done!

Rewrite is much better!

私は万能な佐倉からの批評を頂く! 私の執筆があまりを吸わないことを望みなさい。 (それは日本語に。ない)

Title: Top Secret
Genre: Not a clue
Link: topic42021.html