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I have another thread, but it's become buried and I'm scraping for things to critique. So, I am here to review what you think might need a discerning eye.

What I will Critique: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction, Other Fiction

What I will not Critique: Historical Fiction, Poetry

I will go over all parts of your piece, but I will focus on things like character development, plot, and those things over grammar and usage.

I don't ask for any kind of payment, but I will say that if you review one of my works, I will be more willing to review your work in the future, and my reviews will be even more thorough.

There you go. Those are my terms and conditions. You have been warned.

Some sort of Complication chapter one: topic37085.html

If you would. ^^ Please. Feel free to peruse the subsequent chapters if you like, too.

*hearts* Le Penguin.

what about fanficiton? For this one it isn't needed to know what Silent Hill is. Its just a survivial horror game. Its where your worst nightmares come alive.

topic40716.html prologue

topic40741.html chapter 1

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-Alice