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Reviews from a Tiger, anyone?



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Mon Jun 29, 2009 10:21 pm
mhmmcolleenx0 says...



I don't know if you'll review part of my story if it's not the beginning. It's chapter 1.3. It's pretty short. But, you might have to read at least chapter 1.2 to get the gist of it, or at least scan over it, but you don't have to review that part. The very first part is a little long, but if you read the second you should be fine. Sorry if I worded that weird, I'm really tired. But, it's other fiction. Here's the link:

Falling Slowly [1.3]

Here's the second part if you want to scan that over:

Falling Slowly [1.2]

If you have time, I'd appreciate it a lot.
"Can't stop, won't stop. I must be dreaming."





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Tue Jun 30, 2009 3:35 am
WhiteTiger93 says...



Done. (:

Anyone else like an orignal tiger review? *crickets chirp*
Aw...
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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Mon Jul 13, 2009 6:08 pm
ZannaShepherd says...



Please review my short story 'Fantasist'. It's and entry for the contest 'which path to take'. I would really enjoy hearing your thoughts on it.

Fantasy Fiction
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~Zanna
In order to write about life, first you must live it!

Ernest Hemingway

Hmm, must be why I only write fantasy, that's the only life I've ever lived.
~Zanna





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Tue Jul 14, 2009 12:40 am
TaylaChase says...



Will you please review this?

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Thanks!

~Tayla
A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new.
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Tue Jul 14, 2009 4:02 am
WhiteTiger93 says...



Of course, I'll review them! ^^

Done and done. (:

Anyone else? Please, I am so bored!
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

~A Very Potter Musical - Dumbledore





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Tue Jul 14, 2009 6:16 pm
afeefah says...



Hi Tiger! Could you please review this. It's fantasy fiction. Rip it to shreds!

Thanks!

Afeefah :D
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Tue Jul 14, 2009 6:44 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



Luna 1
This one! This one!
Want a heavenly review?

GENERATION 30: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.





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Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:15 pm
WhiteTiger93 says...



Hey, um, Afeefah, you didn't leave a link or the name of your story. ): Could you post one, so I can reveiw it? ^^

Also, Pink your link didn't work, but I'll look up Luna 1 under your portfolio and finish it ASAP. ^^

Anyone else. I'd be glad to review.
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

~A Very Potter Musical - Dumbledore





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Fri Jul 17, 2009 10:46 am
RainWanderer says...



You seem like you really like to review, Tigy. Oh and you mind if I call you WhiteTigy instead of WhiteTiger? It sound more cute and less typing. And now, my story to feed your reviewing hunger:

Mechanical Fairies: Part1
Part2
Part3

P.S: You mind being my friend too? My friend list is...kinda short...>_>
Who am I? Just a wanderer, traveling from real life to dreams.

“Writing a book is a very lonely business. You are totally cut off from the rest of the world, submerged in your obsessions and memories.” - Mario Vargas Llosa





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Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:23 pm
fragile_heart(!) says...



Hi there!

Can you review A Sailor at Heart?

It's romantic fiction :wink:

But it's pretty depressing, if I do say so myself. :(

Anyways, thanks!

- Fraggle





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Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:50 pm
Threnody says...



Hi Tiger!

Can you please review this poem for me? Be as harsh as you feel appropriate.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic51214.html

Thanks!!!!!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~





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Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:16 am
200397 says...



Hey, Tiger! Can you review this for me? It's for a contest, but the deadline's in August, so take your time. :)

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Thanks a bunch! :D

~Sunny





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