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Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:09 pm
MuffinWriter says...



post541005.html#541005

If you don't mind. It's a poem. Not very good, but hopefully you won't die while reading it.
Why does believe have the word lie in it?

*like the line in my dp? Check out my one poem: "In Repair". I made the dp to match the poem.





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Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:47 pm
wiccaryan says...



I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

topic46539.html

Chapter 3 and 4

post541780.html#541780

i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx
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Tue Apr 14, 2009 6:51 pm
fluteluvr77 says...



Hiya guys! Life's been pretty hectic lately so sorry for the extremely long waits. I'll try to review all the requests I have already as soon as possible. But, I think I'm going to close this thread until everything calms down a bit.

Love,
fluteluvr77<3
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Tue Apr 14, 2009 11:14 pm
Musicaloo7311 says...



Darling wifey- don't think you have to do mine! You know what, don't bother, all right? You're too busy! :D
Click-ity click! Reviews here. :)
The Completely Evil Plan.

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Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:30 am
asxz says...



Well, I'm not looking for a review as such, But could you please look at my blog? It's not a blog as such, but a story from which I post daily... you know, so i don't have to think about chapters, but can just write a diary for my character!
Well, I'm not looking for a review, just a small look at what I'm doing and what I could change! Could you please post your comments [they can be as short as you like] in the comments section of whatever post you look at? There are only 3 so far, so it shouldn't take you that long, and you don't even need to review! I don't mind if you take a few days/ a week though... That's sweet!
Oh, and I almost forgot! Here's the link to [my blog] 'Dear Diary'

Thank you so much!
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:44 am
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fluteluvr77 says...



Jaz - I'll finish tomorrow...

Music - I'm half done!

Everyone else is done though! Any more?
Love is the answer to life yet the slowest form of suicide.
Love is a paradox.
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 5:42 am
Jamie_rocks says...



Hello! When you get around to it, I cold use a review on the preface I just posted for a novel I'm working on. It's short, so it shouldn't take you too long. I really just need constructive criticism, overall would be good, I think. Thanks in advance!

post544843.html#544843

Oops, almost forgot; it's supernatural, though not too much at ths point in the story, since it's only the preface.
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:45 pm
Threnody says...



Hello! I would really appreciate it you could take a look at this poem and review to your most harshest extreme. Thank you so so so much!

Link
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Thanks again!

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Forever Threnody
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:46 pm
anti-pop says...



Here ya go, dear.

post544871.html?highlight=#544871

Please tear it up. It's definitely not my best. XD
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

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Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:58 pm
fluteluvr77 says...



Whoa!! I didn't check this in a while and I just got back! :P

So, I'll get started soon! Comin' right up, y'all!
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 8:32 pm
Kamas says...



Ok but only Cause you asked and I'm desperate
You can choose one of the few below ( you don't need to do all of them)

(I'm a poet For your information :D )


http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46613.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44468.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43385.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42799.html

Thanks Lots
K A M A S :wink:
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Wed Apr 22, 2009 2:20 am
fluteluvr77 says...



Jaz, Threnody, and Kamas are done!

Others are coming...

**Edit** - Apparently I have to redo Kamas...But, I'll get to the rest of y'all first...
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Wed Apr 22, 2009 5:21 pm
Incognito says...



Pssst. Over here. I'll do a trade. If you review my work, I will review one of yours. xD
Don't feel obligated to review this. It is for a contest and I wish to fix it up before the deadline. ;)

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P.S. If you want me to review one of yours PM me or post it here. ;)
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Thu Apr 23, 2009 2:14 am
fluteluvr77 says...



Jaz, Threnody and Pop are done.

Jamie - Tomorrow.

Incog - I don't know if I can review it, dear! I've never read the Other Boleyn Girl. PM me a quick summary?

Kamas - Tomorrow or the day after, dear!
Love is the answer to life yet the slowest form of suicide.
Love is a paradox.
And that's why we love it.

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Tue Apr 28, 2009 2:43 am
Jamie_rocks says...



Okay, let's try posting the link again:

topic46874.html
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