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Done, Joshua!
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work.php?id=94229

Hayyy gurl hayy. [:
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Hey! Would mind taking a look at this for me please? Thank you :-)
- From the moment I picked your book up until I laid it down I was convulsed with laughter. Some day I intend reading it -

- If the doctor told me I had 6 minutes left to live, I'd type faster -


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Done!
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Top o' da mornin' to ya!

Would you mind spewing your awesomeness into a review on the opening chapter of my novel,Twit?

work.php?id=94544

Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.




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Thanks :-)
- From the moment I picked your book up until I laid it down I was convulsed with laughter. Some day I intend reading it -

- If the doctor told me I had 6 minutes left to live, I'd type faster -


I laugh at my own signature. Sad? Yes.




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Done, Skinskin!
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Twiiiiiitty!

Can you please take a look at this thing? I made edits on it so it's all shiny and new and needs some new key marks. :3
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Done, Shears!
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Hey, Cas here.

Would you mind reviewing the first two chapters of my newly edited book Haze?

First chapter: work.php?id=94662

Second chapter: work.php?id=94663
My SPD senses are tingling.




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Hi Twit!

I have been reading several of your reviews and I must say I am very impressed. So I would be honored if you would take a shot at this: work.php?id=94743

It's a little long (3000+ words), so sorry about that.
It's my first attempt at writing fiction, but please don't go easy. Let me know how bad it really is. I'm sure I made tons of mistakes that I am not aware of.

Of course I am willing to wait until you have reviewed everyone's work that was posted before mine.
When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I




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Done everyone!
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Hey Twit!
Please review this piece work.php?id=94811 for me. It's called 'The Hawk' and is sort of a fictional discriptive short story. Thanks!

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Twit!

Can you take a look at this chapter of mine?
Please and thank you.
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham



This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy