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MoonlightMayhem
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Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:17 pm
MoonlightMayhem says... · Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:17 pm
Hi. Could you review Keychain Magic Prologue and Chapter One?
Music <3

Death Cab for Cutie - Funeral For A Friend - A Day To Remember - Taking Back Sunday - Safetysuit - There For Tomorrow - OneRepublic - All American Rejects - Yellowcard - Motion City Soundtrack




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Angelreader77
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Thu Jan 19, 2012 3:51 pm
Angelreader77 says... · Thu Jan 19, 2012 3:51 pm
Rascalover and Moonlight: I'll get on to it as soon as I can. :D
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Angelreader77
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Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:31 pm
Angelreader77 says... · Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:31 pm
Rascalover, the topic's locked...
Moonlight, I can't find the topic. Link, please?
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NicholasStone
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Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:35 pm
NicholasStone says... · Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:35 pm
Could you review my story? It's just the prologue, but it's a start.
work.php?id=93110
He stumbled slightly, the limp in his leg still there. He dared not to look at the place he used to call home. He could feel the heat from the fire, the fire that he himself had ignited. He blinked back tears, as he limped away.




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Angelreader77
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Sat Feb 04, 2012 5:22 pm
Angelreader77 says... · Sat Feb 04, 2012 5:22 pm
Done!
Who's next?
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Angelreader77
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Fri Feb 10, 2012 1:54 pm
Angelreader77 says... · Fri Feb 10, 2012 1:54 pm
Requests guys!
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GrymmRipper
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Tue Feb 28, 2012 4:50 pm
GrymmRipper says... · Tue Feb 28, 2012 4:50 pm
work.php?id=93700 would you review my short story? Thank you so much!
Sanity is nonexistent. =_=''

Need reviews for this poem : work.php?id=93702
Thank you so much!




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Angelreader77
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Sat Mar 03, 2012 10:02 am
Angelreader77 says... · Sat Mar 03, 2012 10:02 am
I forgot: Done! Who's next?
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emilybrodo
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Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:12 am
emilybrodo says... · Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:12 am
Can you review this?? It's a friends and she really wants reviews.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93795
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The game

Free reviews here




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DontStopBelieving
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Mon Mar 05, 2012 3:35 am
DontStopBelieving says... · Mon Mar 05, 2012 3:35 am
Can you review my Novel - Wasn't Mine To Take.
I would very much appreciate it.
Thank you

Prologue- http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93761
First Chapter- http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93811
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Angelreader77
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Mon Mar 05, 2012 6:17 pm
Angelreader77 says... · Mon Mar 05, 2012 6:17 pm
emily - It'll take me some time since its really long but I'll get onto it as soon as I can :)
DontStopBelieving - I'll review it as soon as I can :)
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Angelreader77
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Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:03 pm
Angelreader77 says... · Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:03 pm
Took some time, but done!
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harshita3chaarag
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Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:59 am
harshita3chaarag says... · Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:59 am
Hey... I would be grateful if you would review my poem...I want to improve it!!

work.php?id=92722

Thank you so much!!
Harshita:)
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Angelreader77
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Wed Mar 14, 2012 9:11 am
Angelreader77 says... · Wed Mar 14, 2012 9:11 am
Done! =)
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zohali93
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Thu Mar 15, 2012 2:59 am
zohali93 says... · Thu Mar 15, 2012 2:59 am
i'd really really really appreciate it if you could read my novel thing
called untold hidden secrets
and my poem i saidi'm sorry the goodbye

i dont have any reviews so i'm really wondering i dont know if i wrote my novel right.so plzzzz...... thank you sooo much
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