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Angelreader77
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Tue Dec 27, 2011 11:59 am
Angelreader77 says... · Tue Dec 27, 2011 11:59 am
Hi there!
I just realized that have have been here for a long time and I haven't reviewed much. :( Shameful, I know.

I will review:
Poetry - Any kind
Short stories: Fantasy/Action/Adventure/General Fiction/Science fiction

I will not review:
Historical Fiction (I don't do History)
Art and Photography ( I'm hopeless in it myself)
Fanfiction ( A big NO)

I might review:
Novels ( If Im interested enough, yes)
Romance ( Maybe...)
I'm especially good with long stuff. Like really long short stories. I can't say much about short stuff, but I will try.

How I will review:
1) I'll say Hi.
2) I'll give a general idea about what I like in the piece.
3) I'll quote sentences bit by bit and tell you what I liked and didn't like.
4) I'll tell what I didn't like in general.
5) I'll give a general idea - good and bad- about your piece

So, post away! :D
"The cure for anything is salt water- sweat, tears or the sea." --Isaac Dinesen




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mycocosm
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Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:30 am
mycocosm says... · Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:30 am
Hello Angelreader, could you review my story? It's fantasy and it's called Achilles. Thank you!




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AelitaLienne
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Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:45 am
AelitaLienne says... · Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:45 am
Hello! I was wondering if you could please review my short story.

Here is the link.

It is very short, but it is deep in terms of literary features.

Thank you so much!
Aelita
Sometimes all there is left to do is to dream.
~Murakami




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artsy
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Wed Dec 28, 2011 1:01 am
artsy says... · Wed Dec 28, 2011 1:01 am
Could you review my short story, Toxic Valentine please?

Thanks!
"You have brains in your head and feet in your shoes - you can steer yourself in any direction you choose!" - Dr. Seuss
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Angelreader77
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Thu Dec 29, 2011 7:03 am
Angelreader77 says... · Thu Dec 29, 2011 7:03 am
Alfonso and Aelita : Done! :D
artsy: I'm not sure... romance really isn't my thing. I don't think I'd be very helpful :3
"The cure for anything is salt water- sweat, tears or the sea." --Isaac Dinesen




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ShadowLily
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Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:31 am
ShadowLily says... · Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:31 am
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=91639
Thanks in advance!
♫"ѕσ ηєχт тιмє уσυ ѕєє α ѕтяαηgєя, gινє тнєм α ѕмιℓє. αη∂ ιƒ уσυ єνєя ѕαι∂ α нυятƒυℓ ωσя∂, αρσℓσgιzє. єηנσу тнє ρєαcєƒυℓ νιєω ƒяσм уσυя вαcкуαя∂. ℓσνє тнє σηєѕ тнαт уσυ нσℓ∂ ∂єαя, 'cαυѕє ιт αℓℓ мιgнт ∂ιѕαρρєαя. уσυ ∂ση'т кησω ωнαт'ѕ cσмιηg ηєχт. ѕσ αℓωαуѕ ƒσяgινє, ηєνєя ƒσяgєт."♫ -My Song




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Angelreader77
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Thu Jan 05, 2012 8:23 am
Angelreader77 says... · Thu Jan 05, 2012 8:23 am
ShadowLily : Done!
Who's next?
"The cure for anything is salt water- sweat, tears or the sea." --Isaac Dinesen




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amit28it
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Fri Jan 06, 2012 10:43 am
amit28it says... · Fri Jan 06, 2012 10:43 am
hi ,
Will you provide me review of the new android version in the market .please have a look on my question.Thanks for that .




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Benrobertringrose
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Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:14 am
Benrobertringrose says... · Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:14 am
Hi, could you possibly review this short story for me? viewtopic.php?f=6&t=92344

Much appreciated.
Ben




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SpeedyPencil
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Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:20 pm
SpeedyPencil says... · Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:20 pm
Hi would you be able to review mine?
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92391
thankyou so much for doing this!
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.




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TinyDancer
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Sat Jan 07, 2012 2:07 pm
TinyDancer says... · Sat Jan 07, 2012 2:07 pm
Hello there :) Could you review this? It's only relatively short. I don't know what to call it, so I stuck it in Other. Anyway, if you get a chance:
viewtopic.php?f=26&t=92374
Thanks in advance!

~Jess
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No announcements precede it.
It is simply there,
When yesterday it was not.”

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Angelreader77
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Mon Jan 09, 2012 11:14 am
Angelreader77 says... · Mon Jan 09, 2012 11:14 am
Ben - Done!
Speedy and Tiny- I'm on it! :D

EDIT* - Done!
"The cure for anything is salt water- sweat, tears or the sea." --Isaac Dinesen




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ShootingStars
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Sat Jan 14, 2012 12:13 am
ShootingStars says... · Sat Jan 14, 2012 12:13 am
Hey! Shooting Stars here! Would you mind reviewing a few of my stories? I don't really know how to put in a link, so I'll just tell you what they are and where my works are put: :D
1.) "Glory on the Court," Action/Adventure Fiction short stories
2.) "Creativity," General Fiction Short Stories
3.) "The Hate List--- Pilot," General Fiction Novels
Thank you! :)
---Shooting Stars
When you wish upon a star, makes no difference who you are. Anything your heart desires will come to you. -Jiminy Cricket

Don't be afraid to jump, to leap, to fly too far and don't be scared to touch the stars!




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Angelreader77
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:56 pm
Angelreader77 says... · Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:56 pm
Stars- I'm on it! :D
EDIT*- Done!
Last edited by Angelreader77 on Tue Jan 24, 2012 6:34 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Rascalover
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 3:24 am
Rascalover says... · Tue Jan 17, 2012 3:24 am
Can you review my short story please?
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92681
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html

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