The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*

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LadySpark
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Tue Dec 14, 2010 1:33 pm
LadySpark says... · Tue Dec 14, 2010 1:33 pm
everyone else is going to have to wait for a while
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Button
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Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:11 pm
Button says... · Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:11 pm
If you have some time, could you please take a look at this?
topic73251.html

I read that it'll be a while, and that's totally fine. Take your time, all that you need. :)
Thanks so much!

-Coral-




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emoinpink
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Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:13 am
emoinpink says... · Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:13 am
Hey will you review this: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic72883.html it's a General Fiction Short Story, you didn't specify anything about that category so I thought I'd just ask. Thanks! :)
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LadySpark
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Tue Jan 04, 2011 7:59 pm
LadySpark says... · Tue Jan 04, 2011 7:59 pm
ALL DONE!
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Nightshade
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Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:02 am
Nightshade says... · Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:02 am
Hi, would you be willing to review my latest poem?
topic74229.html
Thanks!




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ErBear
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Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:57 am
ErBear says... · Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:57 am
Pointe! Hello!

If you don't mind, sir, I'd enjoy if you could review this chapter of my work...

viewtopic.php?t=73950

Thank you kindly! XD

(PS- I can take a :X... barely.)
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For you.




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LadySpark
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Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:16 pm
LadySpark says... · Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:16 pm
taylor and Nightshade, done!

any other takers???
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LadySpark
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Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:08 pm
LadySpark says... · Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:08 pm
doesn't anyone want a review from yours truly?
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LadySpark
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Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:21 pm
LadySpark says... · Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:21 pm
:(
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LadySpark
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Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:11 pm
LadySpark says... · Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:11 pm
Newly edited. Fresh new look for a fresh new year!
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LadySpark
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Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:49 pm
LadySpark says... · Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:49 pm
doesn't anyone want a review?????????? please???? *sobs sadly*
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Azila
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Tue Jan 18, 2011 6:02 pm
Azila says... · Tue Jan 18, 2011 6:02 pm
Aw! What a lonely thread. :(

I've just posted something and if you feel like telling me what you think of it, I would appreciate that. It's a Sci-fi flash fiction. Please feel free to be mirthless.

Thanks!
Last edited by Azila on Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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LadySpark
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:51 pm
LadySpark says... · Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:51 pm
done! any other takers???
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TabbyGirl
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 7:18 pm
TabbyGirl says... · Sun Jan 23, 2011 7:18 pm
I'll take one, please!

viewtopic.php?t=74980

I'd like you to review this "overall." I typed it in Word, so there shouldn't be any grammar errors. However, if you see any, please let me know :)

THANKS!

--
Tabby




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LadySpark
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Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:27 pm
LadySpark says... · Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:27 pm
Tabby Done, any more takers?
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