Hey! I'm looking for a review of my children's fantasy novel. Right now I have four chapters posted, and the first one has been reviewed a lot. The other three, however, not so much. I'd really appreciate a review of the second, third, and fourth chapters. Here's the link to my profile: profile/BenGrange/portfolio
I hope you like it, but I really hope you find things that need to be fixed/worked through. Let me know what you think.
Thanks!
Ben
"If you really want something, no one can stop you. If you don't want something, then no one can help you." ~ James A. Owen
Hello! Not sure if you're still doing these, but I'd love a review for http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106472. It's the first bit of a novel, but there's only one part currently up, so that's all I'm requesting be reviewed (...that's an awkward sentence...). Thanks in advance!
