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SilentRain
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:45 am
SilentRain says... · Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:45 am
Hello,You said you might review poetry so here you go! topic69750.html

Thanks if you review it, if not, thanks any way...

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!




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Shearwater
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:17 pm
Shearwater says... · Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:17 pm
Hi Yuri, it's me again :)
If it's possible, and if you have time, do you mind reviewing this chapter for me? Since you've read the prologue, I figured I might as well ask you :3
Don't worry, it's the last one! XD
topic69697.html
Thank you, Yuri!

~Pink
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Yuriiko
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 12:42 am
Yuriiko says... · Sat Sep 25, 2010 12:42 am
Done all!

Anyone else? :3
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Elinor
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 1:29 am
Elinor says... · Sat Sep 25, 2010 1:29 am
Could you review this poem for me? viewtopic.php?t=69835

Thanks so much. ^^

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Yuriiko
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:34 am
Yuriiko says... · Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:34 am
Done! :3
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Sins
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Sun Sep 26, 2010 9:56 pm
Sins says... · Sun Sep 26, 2010 9:56 pm
Hey there, Yurii!

Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my novel for me...? There are, like, nine chapters altogether, but don't worry! I don't expect you to review all of them. Well... unless you want to for some reason. :lol: I'd just like to hear your opinion on the first chapter because I want to get it as good as I can.

topic62607.html

Thanks so much!

xoxo Skins
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Yuriiko
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Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:12 am
Yuriiko says... · Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:12 am
Done! :3

Anyone else?
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Mon Sep 27, 2010 3:59 pm
Calligraphy says... · Mon Sep 27, 2010 3:59 pm
Could you review this for me? Thanks a bunch.

A. S.




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Yuriiko
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Thu Sep 30, 2010 10:18 am
Yuriiko says... · Thu Sep 30, 2010 10:18 am
Done, Calli.

Anyone else?
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Thu Sep 30, 2010 1:27 pm
MiaParamore says... · Thu Sep 30, 2010 1:27 pm
Hey Yuri-chan(Huggles)

So I want a review and you might be able to help me out, I guess. So here's the link and try to be harsh. But only to the extent my heart could bear. :lol:

Link: The Road Not Taken-Chapter-1

Thanks in advance!

Loffle you always,
Shubhi
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Yuriiko
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Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:22 pm
Yuriiko says... · Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:22 pm
Done. Anyone else?
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SilentRain
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Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:56 pm
SilentRain says... · Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:56 pm
Hello agian! this is another poem, topic70088.html

Thanks

~Rain~
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Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!




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Yuriiko
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Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:17 pm
Yuriiko says... · Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:17 pm
I'm done, SilentRain.

Anyone else? :3
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SilentRain
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Tue Oct 05, 2010 2:22 am
SilentRain says... · Tue Oct 05, 2010 2:22 am
Well hello agian! Got anoter poem for you here post770000.html#p770000

Thanks

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topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!




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Wed Oct 06, 2010 1:45 pm
BlueShubs says... · Wed Oct 06, 2010 1:45 pm
Hey,

I want one review. :)

Can you review this for me?

So if you don't know by now, it's Shubhi and Bluewaterlily's joint account and it's our novel we've co-written. It's just the prologue.

Thanks in advance!



Turn your demons into art, your shadow into a friend, your fear into fuel, your failures into teachers, your weaknesses into reasons to keep fighting. Don’t waste your pain. Recycle your heart.
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