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Calligraphy
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Wed Sep 01, 2010 9:43 pm
Calligraphy says... · Wed Sep 01, 2010 9:43 pm
Hi, I am open to reviews. I will review anything but:

1.advanced critiques
2.fan-fiction (unless I have read the books)
3.anything rated 18+

Please provide a link with your request.

My stomach just grumbled!

Thank you,

A. S.
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Thu Sep 02, 2010 12:01 am
Rascalover says... · Thu Sep 02, 2010 12:01 am
I would love it if you could review chapter 19 in my romance novel. The link is in my signature. Feel free to review or just read the other chapters if you would like :)
Have an awesome day,
Tiffany
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Calligraphy
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Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:23 pm
Calligraphy says... · Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:23 pm
Done, you are a really good writer.

Anyone else?




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screamandshout
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Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:59 pm
screamandshout says... · Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:59 pm
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Would you mind reviewing my poem, and like if it's any good?




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Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:30 am
ToritheMonster says... · Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:30 am
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thanks! It's a poem, rated E
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Wed Sep 08, 2010 8:55 pm
SilentRain says... · Wed Sep 08, 2010 8:55 pm
Hi!

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Please reveiw my poem??

Thanks!
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Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:02 pm
blackbird12 says... · Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:02 pm
Hey there, would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
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Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:29 pm
ultraviolet says... · Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:29 pm
Hi Cal! [September Contest] It's What I Do. Review it. Now. (Aren't you so proud of me? I entered just like you said! Now REVIEW. :twisted: )
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

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Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:58 am
Calligraphy says... · Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:58 am
Hey, I am going to wait until you re-write this before I review, because at the moment all that I could have said has been said. To everyone else I am open.

A. S.




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Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:14 am
blackbird12 says... · Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:14 am
Hey there, Calligraphy! Me again. Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks a million in advance! :smt003

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