I've read over that poem I don't know how many times now and I can't find anything to help you with. It is perfect. Well, I could have pointed out some grammar mistakes, but other people have already covered that. I wish I could help you, but you have more skill than I do...
Hi, I'd love a review on the first part of my general fiction novel{la}: topic74327.html
It's not rated 18+... it has a medical aspect, but it's not overly gory or anything. And there's really nothing at all in this part since it's just an introduction. Thank you, Pari
Er, this is a tad awkward, but could you review, The New Kid, by me in romantic short stories? Please? I need to know what people think of it! Just, try to not be, too harsh!
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