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BenFranks
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Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:46 pm
BenFranks says... · Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:46 pm
If you're up for a laugh I could do with some feedback on this:
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Cheers.




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Rascalover
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Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:47 pm
Rascalover says... · Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:47 pm
All done :)
Sorry I was gone for so long, but Im back and will be so happy for some stuff to review :)

So whos next??
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sins
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Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:40 pm
Sins says... · Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:40 pm
Hey there :)

Could you please review my fantasy fiction? Don't worry, there are no vampires or werewolves e.t.c. It's kind of a mix between fantasy fiction and realistic fiction. :wink:
post684008.html#p684008

Thanks in advance,

xoxo Skins
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.




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Rascalover
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Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:34 am
Rascalover says... · Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:34 am
All done. hope I was helpful.


Whose next??? :smt003
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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MiaParamore
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Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:52 am
MiaParamore says... · Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:52 am
Hey can you review this? I know its long but I need reviews. So read some part and review for others. As you wish. Won't mind if you turn my piece down.
A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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Rascalover
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Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:01 am
Rascalover says... · Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:01 am
All done.

Whose next ??? :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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MiaParamore
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Fri Apr 16, 2010 1:20 pm
MiaParamore says... · Fri Apr 16, 2010 1:20 pm
Thanks for the reviews dear. This is what I would like you to review next. Please!!!

A Criminal's Heart Chapter-2
A criminal's heart chapter-3
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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Rascalover
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Tue May 11, 2010 11:04 pm
Rascalover says... · Tue May 11, 2010 11:04 pm
All done any one else need some reviews? :) :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Fri May 14, 2010 7:17 pm
Rascalover says... · Fri May 14, 2010 7:17 pm
any one????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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MiaParamore
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Sat May 15, 2010 6:22 pm
MiaParamore says... · Sat May 15, 2010 6:22 pm
Hey there RascalLover. I must say that your avatar is so cool and pretty. Really!

Can you review est of the chapter of my novel-A Criminal's Heart? Just do 4 and 5 now, if its okay. the link is down on my signature. Thanks a lot!

~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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Rascalover
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Sat May 15, 2010 9:03 pm
Rascalover says... · Sat May 15, 2010 9:03 pm
All done I hope they were helpful.

Anyone else need a review?! :pirate3:
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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MiaParamore
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Sun May 16, 2010 8:26 am
MiaParamore says... · Sun May 16, 2010 8:26 am
Hey there. Here asking for reviews.Fancy reviewing this?Love has no boundaries I would review for you if you like.

~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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Rascalover
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Sun May 16, 2010 9:36 am
Rascalover says... · Sun May 16, 2010 9:36 am
All done and thank you.

Anyone else need a review :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Mon May 17, 2010 12:30 am
Rascalover says... · Mon May 17, 2010 12:30 am
bump****
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Fri May 21, 2010 7:34 pm
Rascalover says... · Fri May 21, 2010 7:34 pm
Do I have to begg... cause I will :pirate3:
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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