Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)

Ooooh, same contest as me. *narrows eyes*

No worries, it'll be done by tomorrow!


Kammie's is done, by the way!

~Amy

Oh dear oh dear. I need a review. Can you review my first short story for me? Pretty please with cookies & sugar on top? It's called Reaper, and it's a science fiction-ish story. Thanks!

Gosh, I'm so sorry that I haven't got to it today! I promise to have it done tomorrow!

Thanks so much for the review Aqua!! Its really appreciated

♥'s

-Irish

Done, Pink! Hope it was some help.

And no problem, Irish. Good luck in the competition, even if I do want to win.

~Amy

Aqua!
hey can you do me a favor?

Can you review this ne for me please?
It's called I'll Miss You My Dear Friend

Hello.

Can you please review this for me?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post623303.html#p623303

There is a bit of shooting but not really violence.

All the best.

Hey Aqua, will you review a poem of mine?

I, um, don't really know how to post a link so... *cough*

It's in Narrative Poetry and it's called "Barbara Frietchie"

Thank you!

No problem, guys! I'll do my best to get them all done today (definitely Pudin's because that's been here the longest) but I do need to writr 5,000 words this weekend so it might be done tomorrow!

And, Kate, to post a link simply copy and paste the link (htpp://www.youngwriterssociety ...) highlight it, and then click the URL button at the top there. Hopefully, it will now look something like:

[url}http:// etc etc etc[/url]

That help?

In addition, take a look at this to be extra special clever.

Okay, let me try it out...

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54977.html

Wooohooo!

Thanks, Aqua!

Hey Amy!

Could you possibly review this for me? It's a short-ish piece of Narrative Poetry - I hope you like it!

Battlefields Eulogy

Thanks!

Mia x

Ok, so Pudin's is done. I was really, really flat out today so I haven't had any time at the moment. If I'm lucky then Stealth's and Kate's will be done tonight. If not then I promise they'll all be done tomorrow! Sorry, sorry, sorry.

~Amy

Ok, scratch previous comment! I've done Kate's and Mia's. Stealth, I'm going to do your but you now have three chapters up so I'll work through them! Although I might skip the first one if it has enough comments.

~Amy

*pokes* I've never used one of these little threads. Let's see if it works . . .

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I just need a review on this one chapter. ^^