Aqua, hey there. I need a bit of a hand with this story I just posted. It's Romantic Fiction, about 900 words, called All of the Stars. I appreciate nitpicks because I think my wording's off in places. Eheh, mention if you think the characters are flat, but I'm not thinking major revision on this. Just some general pointers on that side of things, and I'd be really grateful! I'm out of my comfort zone so anything you say, even just as a reader, will help me out a lot. But anyway, I see you have a lot of review traffic most of the time, so no rush if you're busy. It's only been posted in the last 24 hours.
I dont know how to link, but Fire Burns Deep, in the fantasy section. There's a prolouge and two chapters. Also Red, poetry. You dont have to do any, but thats just my stuff
Amy! Guess what? I'm here to help you with your review count! You needed 18, right? And I don't want this on December, so please take fifteen minutes out of NaNo xD
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