Chocoholic's Cheerful Critiques!

chocoholic · 2008-09-04T02:25:01Z

This is (obviously) my critique thread. If you would like a critique from me, just post the link here and I'll get to it as soon as I can. But first, some important information. Why Should You Choose Me To Give You A Critique? I'm an Instructor on YWS and I do my best to help out others with their work. Not only that, but my friends outside YWS are always asking me to read their stories and tell them what I think. I'm constantly getting good marks on English assignments, so I know what I'm talking about. Also, I have two blue stars. What Do I Focus On In A Critique? It depends on what you want! Usually I'll point out the grammatical/spelling errors and then go on to tell you what I did/didn't like about the piece. I'll point out what I didn't understand and what I don't think goes well or what you could add in. But if you want me to focus on something in particular, just tell me and I'll do my best. What Don't I Approve Of In A Piece? or Rating Restrictions I'll critique pieces of any rating, but please, no explicit sex scenes. Violence and swearing is fine, though. What Do I Critique? Other Fiction Romantic Fiction Historical Fiction - I'll critique any period of history, but if it's anything other than Ancient Egypt/Rome, The Tudors or WW2, I won't be able to point out any historical mistakes, only general writing ones Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Action - I'll critique these, but I can't promise they'll be very good, but I'll try For Lyrics, post in this thread Scripts What Don't I Critique? Poetry Art Fan-Fiction Some Other Things To Think About 1. Please don't bother asking me for a poetry or art critique. You won't get it. 2. I'm only taking five critiques at a time. If the list is full, please wait for an opening. 3. I don't demand compensation, but if my critique was helpful I'd love it if you could sign my guestbook or comment on my blog Critiques To Do: None, I'm taking 5 critique requests. Critiques Done: 1. Future Final 2. Paulo's Bridge, Chapter One 3. Cormac and Eddy Discuss Women and Break-Ups 4. The Canaby Witches - Chapter 6 5. And All That Jazz 6. How The Dog Saw It 7. Jared's Seance Series ( 1 , 2 , 3 , 4 , 5 )

Lord Anzius

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Fri Oct 31, 2008 10:01 pm

Lord Anzius says... · Fri Oct 31, 2008 10:01 pm

I am sorry to interrupt... but I am on a jorney to write the greatest book ever. Even though this book has been critted many times I want the piece to be perfect.

I need as many critts as possible.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34323.html

To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
-Giuseppe Verdi-

LoveableLittleSock

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Mon Nov 10, 2008 8:50 pm

LoveableLittleSock says... · Mon Nov 10, 2008 8:50 pm

Hey. Could you please review this for me? It'd be greatly appreciated. Just remember to read the link first, okay? =]

topic38505.html

Thanks a bunch!

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Sun Apr 09, 2023 11:14 am

DreamyAlice says... · Sun Apr 09, 2023 11:14 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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