Young Writers Society

Alright, so you need reviews and nobody is reading your stuff? Let's fix that!

I can review absolutely anything. Yes, you heard me correctly. However, I do have specialties - I am much better at these categories than the others.

-Fantasy or Sci-fi
-Song lyrics

Keep in mind, I can still review absolutely anything, but those are where you can expect the best reviews.

Now, I am better at critiquing some elements than others. Those are:

In fiction:
-Grammar/spelling
-Awkward phrasing
-Plot

In songs/poetry:
-Rhythm
-Meaning
-Forced rhymes

If you would like a review from yours truly, leave the link to your work here.

If you feel the need to thank me, just post in my guest book. If I ever have work up that you can review, I will let you know.

Oh, excellent. How about taking a whack at a dystopic/sci-fi/rebellion's intro?

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Many, many thanks!

Done! Thanks for helping increase my review count!

Okay. . . since you said you'll review almost anything give this a try:

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and here's the second part:

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Tell me what you think, but please don't crush me! I'm really nervous on what people might say. Constructive criticism is welcome though!
Thank you
(also sorry if the links don't work)

Done!

Just to let you guys know, I'm on vacation. Right now, I'm at my grandparents' house, but soon, I will be going to the beach, where I will have no internet access until we get home Wednesday night. As such, I won't be able to get to your requests until then.

Keep the requests coming in, though! Just remember they won't be filled instantly.

I'm back! So feel free to request reviews - I'll get to them ASAP.

Hey thunder dude;
I was wondering if you could glance at my story
A child's play part two point five??
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And you'll probably need to read parts one and two (they're pretty short...ish)
Part one
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Part two
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And I need a knew title... so If something strikes you while your reading it; don't be afraid to mention it. Even if its something terrible and cheesy, like Mimi's Memoirs.

Could you please review my first chapter of my novel, Prydwen Hall? I'm about to mail it off and I'd like to perfect it before I do. I'd so appreciate it if you could.
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