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Can someone please review me work. Needed for tomorrow.



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Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:17 pm
mkjohns says...



Hey i just finished my story for school. We have been doing this for about a week. If i don't get atleast a B my mums going to kill me. So i have come to ask the experts (you) what you should think i will get from a extract i took out from the story.

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i would also just like to enforce the point all i need is a B

Thanks you very much :D





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Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:06 pm
Blink says...



*Moved to Will Review For Food*

Could you ask this in one of the threads in this forum, please?

Thanks,
Blinky
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Mon Jun 12, 2023 11:44 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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