Young Writers Society

Confession Booth: Ahem. Well, there's a reason why I hadn't done this till now. You see, though I read quite a few works every time I visit YWS, I sometimes find it difficult to really tell a fellow writer what he or she could do to improve his or her work. That, said, when I do decide that I cannot abandon a particular piece, I always give my best for a review.

Podium Announcement: I, Plant Palantalid, hereby declare that I am open to requests for my professional services regarding written matter. Though I prefer reviewing poetry (long or short) and unrelated prose (y'know short stories or a series of drabbles etc.) I will also give my limb to prescribe stuff for novellas and...stuff (especially so if you have a secret crush on me or like the sound of my name).

So, whenever you like. Whatever you've got. I'm ready for it...

Reveiws done:
Young Gun's Strange Love III- The butterfly effect
Pretty Crazy's Acomia- Land of Dragon Trainers (part 2)

Would this qualify for a review?-

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You don't have to do nitpicks if you don't want to. I just need as many peoples' opinions as I can get.
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If you don't want to do it I'd understand.
Thanks.

First and foremost,really helpful insight.The story was not based on personal experience but did lack creativity I guess.

Tell me if you found this creative:
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If you would not like to review,its fine,but I need to know if it was creative.

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