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Hi Thren!!! Can you please review this one piece called "You don't mean it." I'll make you find it cause I'm too lazy to dig it up. Thank you sososososo much!

Yes.

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Thanks.

I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

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Chapter 3 and 4

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i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx

Done with both. Brilliant job guys!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

Hi Forever! Will you please review my NaPo's thread?
I don't have the link right now, but if you go to Literature Forum, you'll see the sub-forum of NaNo, is the National Poetry Month etc. So scroll down and I'm there. oh, what am I babbling about! I'm sure you know just how to get there.
Anyway, thanks!

*Kat*

A story in Other Fiction?

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Would be thrilled if you took a look at it.

Well, I'm not looking for a review as such, But could you please look at my blog? It's not a blog as such, but a story from which I post daily... you know, so i don't have to think about chapters, but can just write a diary for my character!
Well, I'm not looking for a review, just a small look at what I'm doing and what I could change! Could you please post your comments [they can be as short as you like] in the comments section of whatever post you look at? There are only 3 so far, so it shouldn't take you that long, and you don't even need to review! I don't mind if you take a few days/ a week though... That's sweet!
Oh, and I almost forgot! Here's the link to [my blog] 'Dear Diary'

Thank you so much!

Asxz~ I'll keep track of that and tell you what I think.

Eimear~ I get started on that in just a sec. It'll be done in a few.

hey! fancy a short story?

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Thank you so so much Its a first draft so be extra nit picky

thanks

Would you care to take a look at what's possibly going to be my first novel (a very early version, however)?

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Thanks in advance!

I am still hungry. Now more than ever...

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