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Incog's Tempting Reviews



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Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:00 pm
Incognito says...



Hello there!~
I am Incognito if you didn't know that already, and I am looking forward to reviewing some of your works if you need one. Response guarenteed! ;D

My reviews are thorough, and I go through different elements in your story with you. And hopefully I will help! I will review anything, and that means anything. Including Art or Photography! I am good at those!

So post the link here, with the title and the genre; and soon enough that review will be there as if from magic. ;)

~Incognito
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:06 pm
Fortuna says...



topic49156.html please and thank you!





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Wed Jun 10, 2009 5:44 pm
Incognito says...



Finished! Any more?
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:30 pm
fragile_heart(!) says...



Incog!
Could you do a poem for me?!

topic49173.html


Merci in advanced!





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Fri Jun 12, 2009 1:12 am
Incognito says...



Done! Anymore?

EDIT: Just a forwarning. I am going away for a canoe trip, so I will get to the reiews posted as soon as possible.
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:19 am
Crouching Tuna says...



Hello

Can you please review my first piece here? It's just the prologue but hopefully it's interesting enough for you to take a look.

Here you go

I posted the problems that I noticed in my own posts there, which is something with the beginning of the piece.

cheers
Tuna
Picture is worth a thousand words, but it uses up 3000 times the memory.





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Wed Jun 07, 2023 7:00 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE
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