(Not much more mind you.;p)
So I thought I'd start with increasing my review count by at least two hundred...and then possibly becoming a instructor.(it's not just for the purple...honest)
So.....
Who wants a nice risky review?
I have no real rules, I just ask for a link to the story, and perhaps a please...or at least a polite nod....
No stabbing...not just yet.....
Usually, I'll be inclined to use my reviewing system, as shown below, but that depends on how much I like the story, or how tired I am at that moment.
1. Readability - How easy your story is to read. A good story will obviously be much easier to read than a bad one.
Flow of words /3
Thoughts conveyed well /3
Overall feeling /3
How well each topic flows from paragraph to paragraph /1
Overall /10
2. Description - How well described your story was, including the language you use.
Good/over use of words: /3
Accurate/poor description: /3
Atmosphere /3
Description used /1
Overall /10
3.Originality - How original the story is. If it's been done before this will be low.
Concept: /3
Wording: /3
Creativity(Creatures, places) /3
Inventive /1
Overall /10
4.Confusion? - was this story easy to understand?
Use of words /3
Use of storyline /3
Ability to continue flow of story without jumping too much /3
Impression to the reader /1
/10
5.Spelling/Grammar - You lose a point for every spelling mistake you make. All the more reason to consult the editing department!
Half a point per mistake
Overall /10
(Reviewers should also give a comment on each section)
Overall /50
Comments:
All deliveries made by Chocobo or dragon (if it's a rainy day).
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You may pet the dragon. but not the chocobo
Gender:
Points: 890
Reviews: 17