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Thu Jan 01, 2009 8:49 pm
SeleneForeverDream says...



Hey, Selene here! If you need an analysis of your work, just ask here. I love critiquing, so I am now accepting requests.

What I will review:
~All Fiction
~All Poetry
~Lyrics
~Scripts

I charge nothing, although points are greatly appreciated. :wink:

I'll get to your writing ASAP, but I will post if I'm on vacation and cannot accept requests. You can PM me if you have any questions or comments about your review.

My reviews can be harsh, but detailed. I promise to give you the best! :) Just give me the link and I will review as soon as I can. You may also ask for reviews to your heart's content.

Waiting List:
~200397

Completed Reviews:
~Ducati
Last edited by SeleneForeverDream on Sat Jan 03, 2009 2:08 pm, edited 3 times in total.





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Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:45 am
Ducati says...



Could you review this, pretty please?
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When you look at your life, in a strange new room, maybe drowning soon, is this the start of it all?





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Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:48 pm
SeleneForeverDream says...



Ducati- Done. Anyone else care for a review?
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Fri Jan 02, 2009 9:14 pm
Ducati says...



I can't actually see your review...did you post it under a different user name?
When you look at your life, in a strange new room, maybe drowning soon, is this the start of it all?





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Fri Jan 02, 2009 9:38 pm
SeleneForeverDream says...



That's wierd... I posted it. Maybe you could check again?
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Fri Jan 02, 2009 9:44 pm
Ducati says...



And there it was...spooky. It was invisible like the first two times I checked.
When you look at your life, in a strange new room, maybe drowning soon, is this the start of it all?





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Sat Jan 03, 2009 3:48 am
200397 says...



Hey, Selene. Can you review these for me? Bare in mind they're part of the same chapter, just in two posts because it's so long.

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Thanks.

~Sunny





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Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:11 am
Night Mistress says...



can you review this? please

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"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

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Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:08 am
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