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Though I am new to the site, I'm great at critiquing almost any aspect of a story outside of grammar. If you wish, I'll critique your work on aspects of character and plot.

However, I work best with stories of these genres:

Romance
Fantasy
Horror
and anything Vampire


In return, I ask for nothing else.
Just post me the link you your work and I'll get on it as soon as possible.

Hey! Could you look over this story for me? I'm not sure what you call it, to be honest. It's not fantasy, but it's not romance either.
More... realistic fiction? I dunno. I guess it resembles romance in it is set a teenage level, in modern day. I just don't think romance will be the main point. Anyway, see for yourself-

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Awesome, thanks for that. Can you do part three now? lol

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romantic fiction: topic40060.html

Will you review ???

Tiff

Would you please review my werewolf story?

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Thanks!

Hi, lilymoore! *shakes hand*

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A short romantic piece.
Kinda sad.

Thank you so much!


*anti-pop

title: posion Love- prolouge
genre: romance fiction
link: topic31457.html

This is my Longest story. I Will make it perfect!
I have edited the first chapter about a thousand times, so I am not asking for a review for it, but instead for the next chapter, and the third.

But If you wish to read it anyways, I have posted it below (Please critt at least the second and third chapter **puppy eyes**)

The mansion:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34323.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35415.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35811.html

Now, this started off as a story piece for English, but now I have it handed in and graded, I was thinking that I would love to expand on it a bit more. So, I would love a harsh, truthful critique, please, to help me along with this new working progress.
It's in 'Other Fiction' and is a short horror story. Please, take your time on it, here is the link and many, many thanks in advance!!

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--Lucyy xx

title: poison love - chapter 1
genre: romance fiction
link: topic32635.html

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