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Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:20 pm
LoveableLittleSock says...



Alright!

I have something for you guys! It's an entry for JFW's contest. Erm, if you could skip over the cliche vampire-ending thing, that would be great. I was uncreative and couldn't think of another way to end it.

To tell you the truth, I'm fully informed on how to get a critique from you guys. You donate points, and such and such. I'm just getting 30 points out of this post so I can get a free crit. Bwahaha.

Here's the link, if you want it: topic31662.html

Thanks a bunch!
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Tue Jun 17, 2008 3:24 am
Alteran says...



Donate to the CCF Account.
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Tue Jun 17, 2008 6:44 am
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sabradan says...



Icaruss wrote:OK, I got a three-part story called Tangled Up In Blue.

1: post382487.html
2: topic31268.html
3: topic31373.html

I'm guessing I have to pay 30 points for each installment. So. Who do I give my 90 points to? I did read the old post, but since it's a grand re-opening and stuff, maybe the rules have changed? I don't know.


To the account "cabassi crime family" and also note, because it is an installment of 3 parts, the deadline for all of them will also be extend (basically 5 days per installment)
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Sat Jul 26, 2008 10:04 pm
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Gadi. says...



I've donated and asked for a critique almost a month ago, and I still haven't recieved my critique.
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Tue Jul 29, 2008 6:23 am
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Jamie_rocks says...



I donated at least five days ago. It would be nice to receive a review soon, seeing how many people seem to be involved in this CCF thing.
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Wed Jul 30, 2008 6:05 pm
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Conrad Rice says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33308.html/

Donated 50 points for specialized critique.
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Thu Jul 31, 2008 6:00 am
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Jamie_rocks says...



Still waiting on a review. *snore*
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Sun Aug 24, 2008 6:21 am
dreamintechnicolour says...



I donated 5 days ago... still no critique......





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Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:37 am
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Jamie_rocks says...



I never got my critique, and I asked over three months ago. This place is a rip-off.
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Sun Apr 09, 2023 10:56 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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