Critique Shop - Open

Alright!

I have something for you guys! It's an entry for JFW's contest. Erm, if you could skip over the cliche vampire-ending thing, that would be great. I was uncreative and couldn't think of another way to end it.

To tell you the truth, I'm fully informed on how to get a critique from you guys. You donate points, and such and such. I'm just getting 30 points out of this post so I can get a free crit. Bwahaha.

Here's the link, if you want it: topic31662.html

Thanks a bunch!

Donate to the CCF Account.

Icaruss wrote:OK, I got a three-part story called Tangled Up In Blue.

1: post382487.html
2: topic31268.html
3: topic31373.html

I'm guessing I have to pay 30 points for each installment. So. Who do I give my 90 points to? I did read the old post, but since it's a grand re-opening and stuff, maybe the rules have changed? I don't know.

To the account "cabassi crime family" and also note, because it is an installment of 3 parts, the deadline for all of them will also be extend (basically 5 days per installment)

I've donated and asked for a critique almost a month ago, and I still haven't recieved my critique.

I donated at least five days ago. It would be nice to receive a review soon, seeing how many people seem to be involved in this CCF thing.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33308.html/

Donated 50 points for specialized critique.

Still waiting on a review. *snore*

I donated 5 days ago... still no critique......

I never got my critique, and I asked over three months ago. This place is a rip-off.

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