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Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:57 pm
yoha_ahoy says...



Dun, dun dun dun, dunnnn!!! Give me moar! :twisted:

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Mon Aug 04, 2008 3:37 pm
Jon says...



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It is fantasy fiction and Chapter Six of well Chapter Six :D

But I'm afraid you'll have to read all Five chapters leading up to that if you want to know what's happening in Chapter Six, but you don't have to, I only want a crit on this.

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Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:04 pm
andimlovegalore says...



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I posted this a little while ago and go 0 reviews =[ so I guess I'll just pass it round a bit ^^ a little reply would be nice ^_^





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Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:41 pm
Conrad Rice says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33997.html

Be harsh, won't you please?
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Thu Mar 30, 2023 8:45 pm
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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