Warnah's Reviews

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Hey guys :D

I'm trying to get more reviews under my belt, so I'd appreciate you submitting any pieces of yours (new or old) to have reviewed!

I prefer to review short stories and novel chapters of any genre, but feel free to submit anything else, I'm not afraid to give things a try :)
Last edited by Warnah on Fri Oct 09, 2015 8:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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Hey there, could you please review:

Untitled Fantasy Story: The Chalice of Life: Prologue

Thanks in advance. If you want to review the other subsequent chapters, feel free to do so.




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Hi Warnah, Felistia here.
I would love it if you could review the novel I am writing. It is called the Search for the Ruby of Fire and is a fantasy and action novel. :D :D :D :D
I would advise reading the prologue, but you don't have to review it. I have had a lot of feed back for it already and don't really need another review on it. I really need review on the other chapters though.
Here is the link for the prologue and the first chapter. Please review, it would be a great help. :D :D :D

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Prologue-124445
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124490




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Can you please review my novel.
Here's the link to the first chapter:
New Haven: Chapter 1: The Train of Memories



It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien