I have been reading a few of your reviews and I have to say I like what I see. (I'm a picky reviewer myself as well). I noticed you said that you review individual chapters. Not many reviewers are willing to do that. I posted Ch.9 from my novel about 2 weeks ago and I haven't got any feedback on it yet. Would you take a look at it for me? (I added a very brief plot summary at the beginning).
When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind. — Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind