Car-in-a Review

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Carina
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Mon Jun 17, 2013 5:50 pm
Carina says... · Mon Jun 17, 2013 5:50 pm
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...Anyways.

I thought I could step up my reviews. I specialize in mainly short stories or novels, and you can try if you give me anything else, though it will mainly be my thoughts on it. :) I try to be as encouraging as possible; after all, reviews are to promote you to keep writing, correct?

List away! :D
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Blackwood
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Wed Jul 17, 2013 4:58 am
Blackwood says... · Wed Jul 17, 2013 4:58 am
Shes not even scary.
Hahah....haha.....ahahaha.




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Carina
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Wed Jul 17, 2013 5:06 am
Carina says... · Wed Jul 17, 2013 5:06 am
One month and no replies...

D: I promise I don't bite.
Unless you're delicious.
chaotic lazy
—Omni

the queen of memes
—yosh

secret supreme overlord of yws
—Atticus

saint carina, patron saint of rp
—SilverNight




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ArcticMonkey
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Sat Jul 27, 2013 10:49 pm
ArcticMonkey says... · Sat Jul 27, 2013 10:49 pm
This is a bit old but here is The Spark, oh and it's a poem, sorry! xD

Thank you!
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LadySpark
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Mon Aug 19, 2013 12:39 pm
LadySpark says... · Mon Aug 19, 2013 12:39 pm
You look like you could use something to review, so here-- have the first three chapters of my novel!

It's young adult romance fiction stuff

Thanks darling! :)
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these tornadoes are for you


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Shady
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Mon Aug 19, 2013 8:26 pm
Shady says... · Mon Aug 19, 2013 8:26 pm
Well, if you need something to do...
The Charm of Deception- Chapter Three, Part One could use ripped apart.

Thanks so much! c:

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