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2! Could you reviewchapter 9of my novel for me please! I would like to know just a general impression of this chapter and some suggestions on where I should add description. (It's way to talky right now)
Check these out please! :)
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people requesting outside of WRFF thread

Jash- post818645.html#p818645
Michealy- viewtopic.php?t=75922
Theotherone- viewtopic.php?t=75687
AllieMedows- (chapter 12-13) novel.php?id=1000
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Ogygia, I can give you the link later. I don't feel like opening a new tab
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you have requested a review from me, yet to be finished.

Well, they shall be done! (in this order,)

1.Skins
2. the other one
3. Saks
4.Allie
5. Jash
6. Micky
7. Raxxfishies


once again, my deepest apologies.

p.s. these reviews will be done over a series of weeks.

Thank you for your patience.

~Pointe
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reopened and needy!
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Can you review the three chapters I currently have up for my Fantasy Novel? You can choose which ever one you want to actuly review, or just read for the fun. Or review all of them, that'll be nice. :3

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Thanks! ^^




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You review Dramatic Poetry. I write Dramatic poetry ;)

Feel like reviewing this?

I will, of course, review in return!
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Reopened! Again :3
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*rings bell* Open! Please donate to the Sparky point fund today!
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Hey Spark, can you review this for me please.... work.php?id=97343

thanks!!




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Pwease review the first chapter of my story! It is the first thing I've written in months and I'm dieing for someone to look at it </3

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I'll review both pieces sometime tomorrow, along with the two SB posts I have to make! :)
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Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
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