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PLEASE ALLIYAH YOUR THREAD gentle and bittersweet and achingly beautiful <3
My favorite poem is 7. photo-keeping - it almost reads like a diary entry, wherein you're trying to capture this person into memory and it's the first flushes of all those soft feelings and fears that they're going to leave - your poem encapsulates all of that so heartbreakingly well I am left speechless
A close favorite is 6. you and i - something I love is how you repeat the first line as the final line, making it seem like even the poem is orbiting around itself like its subject - very clever!
A favorite line from your thread is ->
I audibly GASPED when I read this - it packs such a punch!
Great going so far, alliyah!! <333
My favorite poem is 7. photo-keeping - it almost reads like a diary entry, wherein you're trying to capture this person into memory and it's the first flushes of all those soft feelings and fears that they're going to leave - your poem encapsulates all of that so heartbreakingly well I am left speechless
A close favorite is 6. you and i - something I love is how you repeat the first line as the final line, making it seem like even the poem is orbiting around itself like its subject - very clever!
A favorite line from your thread is ->
& wonder is it worse
to know you will never count
or that i will never lose track?
I audibly GASPED when I read this - it packs such a punch!
Great going so far, alliyah!! <333
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