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gem gEM GEEMMM !!! my head is swimming from the poetry I'm reading from you (and that is an absolute compliment, because it means I am physically feeling your poetry and immersed in it!)
Ah! Every single poem you write here is so distinct and formatted in different ways, according to their subject matter and tone, and they all carry such intense imagery and emotion that I LOVE!
Some lines that really stood out to me (but let's be real, I feel like all your poems are standouts at this point)
And the way poem #6 is about arguing with another person and so the entire poem feels like a back and forth dialogue that cuts each other off, mimicking a real argument - GENIUS!!!?? i love that so much!
Keep up the beautiful work! <333
Ah! Every single poem you write here is so distinct and formatted in different ways, according to their subject matter and tone, and they all carry such intense imagery and emotion that I LOVE!
I am but a turned over cup of sludge
pretending to be coffee
and it creaks eternally but it cannot be seen everyone was told since birth
dry sitting in your mouth in powdery crumbs travelling down your throat like lumps and into your chest like rocks
Some lines that really stood out to me (but let's be real, I feel like all your poems are standouts at this point)
And the way poem #6 is about arguing with another person and so the entire poem feels like a back and forth dialogue that cuts each other off, mimicking a real argument - GENIUS!!!?? i love that so much!
Keep up the beautiful work! <333
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