Sonder, your NaPo threads is one of my favorites! There are so many intriguing lines and thoughts in here. 23 feels very honest, easy to relate to. Really enjoy the word choice in 20. And I can't quite figure out what 27 means, but gosh it's intriguing - especially those last 5 lines, "and i wonder if the only reason why we / worship / moons / is thanks to / stolen glory."
Somehow your whole thread feels really cohesive and written in one voice even though you have great variety in the formatting and don't always use the same emotions or themes. There's this thread on continuity. Well done! And good luck finishing your last few poems!
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
What is a poet? An unhappy person who hides deep anguish in his heart, but whose lips are so formed that when the sigh and cry pass through them, it sounds like lovely music. — Søren Kierkegaard, Philosopher & Theologian
