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Tue Jul 05, 2011 5:09 am
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Karzkin says...



This empty expanse;
Just me, the night, and freedom.
"Get off the road, fool!"
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Tue Jul 05, 2011 5:43 am
SubjectBlue says...



a mountain in white
snow flakes dancing in the wind
winter's sun at dusk
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Fri Jul 08, 2011 10:38 pm
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Calm flowing river
meanders through the forest
providing water
"You know how writers are... they create themselves as they create their work. Or perhaps they create their work in order to create themselves."-Orson Scott Card
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Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:04 pm
Lumi says...



For all I've given,
I beg of you to come back.
I'm dead without you.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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Sun Jul 31, 2011 6:42 am
TheModernist says...



Bent low and forlorn
roses will droop unnoticed.
Winter is loveless
There's no rain there's no me, I'm tellin' ya man sure as shit. - From Poem by Jack Kerouac
  





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Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:18 am
noninjaes says...



Winter is loveless
Cold and bitter nights of snow
Yearning for Springtime
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Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:35 pm
shadowraiki says...



Their death will haunt me
Forever and forever
Memories remain
If words are just letters put together, why do we decide on what they mean?

I step away from the grammar to review the story.

I don't do poetry.
  





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Thu Aug 11, 2011 2:18 am
Lumi says...



When I write Haiku,
and count every last beat,
I count on my toes.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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Thu Aug 11, 2011 3:09 am
Mikko says...



Because never will
My ten fingers be enough
To count all of them.
when she needs to shelter from reality she takes a dip in my daydreams
  





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Tue Aug 16, 2011 3:13 am
Lumi says...



From heaven, light falls;
fresh is the rain that cleanses
the poet of sins.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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Fri Sep 16, 2011 2:47 pm
Karzkin says...



The poet is lost:
Washed away by the torrent
Of his catharsis.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:23 pm
Lumi says...



Like a wind comes love:
roused in the heart like blown leaves,
gone with the northern.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:23 pm
Kale says...



Dry husks crinkle, the
death-brown blanket I stand on —
the trees shed their skin.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
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Mon Nov 28, 2011 9:43 pm
Lumi says...



Fire shreds through the hills,
a master blaze of auburn;
autumn comes swiftly.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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