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Wed May 18, 2022 12:37 pm
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Starve says...



let the forest burn
even the blood-rivers ebb
I am become Faust.
  





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Wed May 18, 2022 12:45 pm
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Kelisot says...



I am become Faust
A contract with Mephisto
Fulfill my wishes
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Wed May 18, 2022 6:39 pm
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Moonglade says...



Fulfill my wishes
Like a magician’s thin wand
So small, hear it snap
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Wed May 18, 2022 9:18 pm
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Kelisot says...



So small, hear it snap
The flow of life is tangled
No love, pain, greed, hope
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Thu May 19, 2022 5:02 am
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Moonglade says...



No love, pain, greed, hope
An endless mirage of waves
Bangs me to the floor
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Thu May 19, 2022 9:28 am
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Liminality says...



Bangs me to the floor,
the thunder on a black night,
the lightning is bright.
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Thu May 19, 2022 11:05 am
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Moonglade says...



The lightning is bright
Within the grey cloudy oceans
Of shining starlight
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Thu May 19, 2022 11:48 am
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Kelisot says...



Of shining starlight
The moon starts fading away
A night full of stars
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Thu May 19, 2022 12:15 pm
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lliyah says...



a night full of stars
makes the whole world seem softer
if only in light
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu May 19, 2022 12:56 pm
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Kelisot says...



if only in light
i can take peaceful refuge
god is with my soul
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Thu May 19, 2022 5:30 pm
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Moonglade says...



God is with my soul
As I extend my hand to
Open paths of grace
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Fri May 20, 2022 2:23 am
Kelisot says...



Open paths of grace
Flowers bloom across my path
But it is a lie
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Fri May 20, 2022 3:51 am
Moonglade says...



But it is a lie;
Jews survived, it is a lie
We celebrated

Spoiler! :
The context of this poem was written due to the belief of memories being from the future and history from the past. So when I say it is a lie I mean they were killed but in our minds they survived and as long as we remember their memory they will always live on.
Last edited by Moonglade on Sat May 21, 2022 7:00 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri May 20, 2022 4:45 am
Starve says...



Spoiler! :
Not sure if the above poem is anti-semitic? Steering away


We celebrated
the speeds this train is reaching
a party of Verse.
  





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Fri May 20, 2022 5:05 am
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lliyah says...



a party of verse,
an exchange of rhyming lines
it's poetry time.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  








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