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Mon Feb 06, 2017 2:41 am
Europa says...



@LeftyWriter either one works for me. And I think they could be approached while Riley is still in the hospital. That would probably be the quickest way to get that out of the way so we can start bringing in the new characters.





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Mon Feb 06, 2017 4:07 am
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Wolfi says...



Cole carrying Riley would be <3
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Tue Feb 07, 2017 3:01 am
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Posted! Let me know if I should change anything, @Europa.

Page 7!!!!

Oh, and... Ciley <3. :D
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Tue Feb 07, 2017 3:14 am
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Europa says...



@LeftyWriter that was amazing!

And...ahhh...Ciley.

Well, I guess that pretty much wraps up our posting spree, so who's going next?





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Tue Feb 07, 2017 3:28 am
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HazelGrace16 says...



Sorry to all the Niley shippers out there but ColeXRiley= OTP! OTP! OTP!
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Tue Feb 07, 2017 3:55 am
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Wolfi says...



How dare you, Lefty! You made me tear up ;-;

Ciley! Ciley!

I could post this weekend for Jinx. What's going to happen next? (What do I write?)

Speaking of Jinx, are we going to bring him into the second storybook? Maybe @Sonder could pick him up again then, else we could give him the noble death she always wanted.
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Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Tue Feb 07, 2017 5:34 am
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Wow, thanks guys! I'm glad you liked it! :D

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Next, (some of?) the Animorphers would probably camp out at the hospital for support and to wait for news of how Riley's doing. Especially Emma, Cole and Neon. Meanwhile, like Europa said, it would probably make sense for the government to approach them while Riley is still in the hospital. Perhaps the government has been trying to find them and Riley going to the hospital finally put them on the map.

Also, I'd had an idea for a complication at the hospital. I can't remember if it was mentioned a while back or not. Anyway, all gunshot cases have to be reported to the police, and because of this, it's normal for them to do a blood test on the victim so they can put any abnormalities in the report that might be tied into what happened (exp: if there was alcohol in their system, etc...). Because Riley has Lynx DNA in her blood, the hospital would find out some very interesting stuff when testing her blood, and would potentially expose them all.

So, the other Animorphers could learn of this and have to figure out how to switch the blood before the hospital can test it. None of the Animorphers would be able to switch it with theirs because they have animal DNA as well. Maybe they would have to let Janey in on their secret in order to use hers, or Michael's mom, given that she was recently let in on their secret.

Maybe they could pull some kind of heist to get it switched in time, like one of them dressing up as a doctor to get into the restricted area and having Neon in their pocket so that he could break into the lab or whatever.

As for Jinx... I personally would like to keep him around for a little while, even if he's just an NPC or secondary character. I have something in mind for Linx (or Jayla?) basically a Layla and Jinx relationship. But I do think his character arc should end with a noble death.
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Thu Feb 09, 2017 3:57 am
Lefty says...



Okay, I'm done posting for a while. :P I just wanted to get those ideas out of my head. Let me know if I should change anything.
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Thu Feb 09, 2017 4:29 am
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Wolfi says...



I love your enthusiasm, Lefty! d: Great posts!

Will Mr. Neil carry over into Animorphers 2.0 as a good guy? I don't remember the plan with him, if there was one.

And yes, I agree that Linx/Jayla is a thing and Jinx has to stay alive for at least a little bit longer. I'll happily still be his writer.
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Thu Feb 09, 2017 5:38 am
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Aww, thanks Wolfie!

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I was thinking that Mr. Neil would carry over at least to an extent. Maybe, now that he's severed ties with the Japanese, he will go back to the government with the research he took from M.E.L. before it was bombed, thus sparking the recreation of the experiment. His goal all along was power and to become an Animorpher himself, but he does want to keep his class safe and now that the Japanese isn't on his side, the best place he can probably go to for help is the government. Maybe that's another thing that prompts the government to approach them; Mr. Neil going to the government and giving them the Animorphers identities (since they lost track of them when the files were destroyed) in return for them funding a new experiment, or something like that.
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Tue Feb 14, 2017 2:43 am
Europa says...



Just checking @Wolfical you were posting next right?





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Tue Feb 14, 2017 2:45 am
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Wolfi says...



Certainly! I won't have time until the weekend, but this is next on my list.
John 14:27:
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
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Sun Feb 19, 2017 4:32 pm
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Lefty says...



Great post, @Wolfical!

Yayyy, Jayla. :D <3
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Sun Feb 19, 2017 7:02 pm
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Wolfi says...



Hehe, thank you :3
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Mon Feb 20, 2017 1:09 am
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Lefty says...



Hey @Chaser, this would probably be a perfect opportunity to jump in and post for Neon. Would you interested in posting next/soon?
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