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Wed Nov 04, 2015 8:29 am
Snoops says...



Can we adopt Frisky and take Astral back to base?
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Wed Nov 04, 2015 1:25 pm
Europa says...



Carlos: *sees giant lion* Can we keep it?

All kidding aside, It would move the story along, but weren't they going to stay on a ranch?
  





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Wed Nov 04, 2015 2:31 pm
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Yeah, that's what I meant. That's tottaly how I actually planned the story to go...:)
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Thu Nov 05, 2015 5:50 pm
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Was my post so bad, everyone ran? Did I scare you guys to death?
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Thu Nov 05, 2015 6:00 pm
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We're just trying to figure out where to go from here. Basically, the whole team needs to be with Ying to transition into Dream-World. We could have a segment where Ying goes nuts and wrecks things, and everyone has to bring him down so the arc can begin. Thoughts?
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Thu Nov 05, 2015 7:24 pm
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@Chaser sounds like the best way to do things.
One question. What about Ying? It's not a too too big problem but I just feel like we should see a little more trouble between him and Blak.
  





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Thu Nov 05, 2015 7:48 pm
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Sounds good.
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Thu Nov 05, 2015 9:05 pm
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So do one of you guys want to do a post where the land and find the base in ruins or something? Cause if so a post of that from Leon's POV would be intreresting kind of a 'Holy heck. Was this how people saw me?' moment :D
  





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Thu Nov 05, 2015 11:22 pm
TheForgottenKing says...



Maybe to enlighten everyone, Ying is now sharing a head with Matt. It'll be explained in my next post
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Thu Nov 05, 2015 11:26 pm
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Okay then, @TheForgottenKing. And maybe could you explain to us what Ying's powers are? They're different from Astral's, right?
  





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Thu Nov 05, 2015 11:27 pm
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If I had to guess, I'd say that Ying's powers extend to telepathy and psychokinesis. Somewhere along those lines, right?
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Thu Nov 05, 2015 11:55 pm
TheForgottenKing says...



Yep! Ying can move things with his mind, but since he's kinda sharing a body with Matt, it's not going to work to its full potential. That's why Ying was able to shift forms instead of letting Blak destroy him in a mind battle. Yings body is broken, spasms, seizures, and such, but his mind is strong.
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Sat Nov 07, 2015 1:21 am
HazelGrace16 says...



Did we acknowledge who was posting next??
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Sat Nov 07, 2015 1:22 am
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It was @TheForgottenKing, Right??? :/
  





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Sat Nov 07, 2015 2:00 am
TheForgottenKing says...



I can et it up tommorow morning!!
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