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Wed Aug 10, 2016 10:35 pm
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sheysse says...



@Tortwag I think it'll be neat for a neutral character to set the story into action. Hopefully everyone else approves. Also I read your character's description, and I feel that she'll get along well with Greywood because of their shared technological abilities... Orrrrrr they'll hate each other. A lot.
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Wed Aug 10, 2016 11:00 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



@Sheyren Fair point! Let's see how it turns out, then, assuming that we do begin with an encouter with Kysalyn.
Also, nah, she'll probably be interested in Greywood's abilities, and he'll probably be interested in her entertainment buildings because MONEEEEEEEEEEY. *re-reads* Then again he has low tolerance for rich people, which she totally is.

...Yes, this might get interesting already, :smt003
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Wed Aug 10, 2016 11:12 pm
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sheysse says...



Lol yes. MONEEEEEYYYYYY. Seeing as she works for her money, Greywood may not dislike her for that reason, but probably will simply make an enemy out of her. Or a best friend for life. Nah, BFFs are boring.
  





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Wed Aug 10, 2016 11:17 pm
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sheysse says...



Does anyone know why when I attempt to use italics a the code is all messed up with extra [i]s and stuff? It's kind of annoying cause I had to rewrite the italics coding thing myself, and I'd like to have the computer do it for me. Anyone know what the problem is?
  





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Wed Aug 10, 2016 11:59 pm
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Poopsie says...



Too many monkeys.

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Thu Aug 11, 2016 12:04 am
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Mageheart says...



Sorry for being on the inactive side today, everyone. I was busy pretty much the entire day. But now I'm free, so I'll get to writing that first post while we wait for @Mea's character!

@Tortwag, thank you for all the details. I'd be happy to start off with you.

@Sheyren, you can report bugs at the Report a Site Bug forum.

Well, I'm off to do the first post! :D
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Thu Aug 11, 2016 12:08 am
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Mea says...



Sorry guys, kinda dropped the ball on writing up the character profile. Should have it in in a few hours!
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Thu Aug 11, 2016 12:18 am
Mageheart says...



Alright! :D
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Thu Aug 11, 2016 12:24 am
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sheysse says...



Ok, weird. Everything works fine now. Hmph. Be that way, YWS. Thanks for all the help!
  





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Thu Aug 11, 2016 1:08 am
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I love the hooded figure already!

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Thu Aug 11, 2016 1:14 am
Mageheart says...



Thanks! :D I put him in a really awkward position, so I'm glad he's turning out alright. I mean, it's hard telling people their entire life has been a lie.

Oh, @Tortwag, I have a suggestion for your post. If you want to make it longer, you can start your post before the hooded figure appears and lead up to when he talks to her. Also, if I got anything wrong, please tell me!
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Thu Aug 11, 2016 1:36 am
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Kelpies says...



Nice post, your character seems to be doing alright despite the awkwardness of the situation as well.
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Thu Aug 11, 2016 2:51 am
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Poopsie says...



can i make an appearance change on my character
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Thu Aug 11, 2016 10:13 am
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Mea says...



It's in! I'm really sorry that took so long.

So... how much are we sticking to 1.10 Minecraft? Because @Mage, you mentioned a miniature train in your post, and that's not in vanilla Minecraft. Unless you meant it was a minecart or something?

I think we should just establish early on exactly how much we're sticking to the real game. Things like backpacks and stuff make since, since normal people don't have an 'inventory,' but aside from that, personally I think it'd be really interesting to try to stick within the confines of the game. I'm just thinking about cool ways to use minecarts as mass transit and whether or not they would use the Nether considering how dangerous it is, and I think it would be fun to logically explore that sort of thing. But if you guys want to go outside 'canon,' I'm open to that too!
We're all stories in the end.

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